Song that i made - like some feedback - Page 2

Twisted mind · 27-07-2012, 01:22 AM

And sorry, I can't think of anything else, it's too late now for my brain to work properly

dms120 · 27-07-2012, 01:29 AM

That's hard... "Our last chance", "she finally came"... too many options fuuu

I have another song recorded...

has a strange name, i even know if is correct or exist... in portuguese it makes sense

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Twisted mind · 29-07-2012, 10:48 PM

Okay so I tried finding some titles again:

closed doors

what's worse?

mine is yours

the past is the present

locked

now it's time

wise madness

wrong turns

dms120 · 30-07-2012, 12:43 AM

Thanks for not quit this

Some make sense others not... i love wise madness, it's an awesome name really but not for this song. But that name deserves a song not kiding xD

now it's time fits but i dont think is the one.

I just think in a name when i came to the forum xD I was thinking in a name that shows that the "she" of the song loses his pride and try to fix the things do you see? or she yield to love(i dont know the correct words

)

I know I'm being boring, sorry, and thanks for the help

Comuris · 06-12-2012, 09:32 PM

Its good i really like the second song but which music you would like make. so i can give you a little bit advice. I think it will be better if you have band, because if you don't your making music like Ed Sheeran ( not that its bad artist ) i don't know if you want that

dms120 · 07-12-2012, 04:25 PM

Sorry, i dont understand what you said... your english is worse than mine

Are you saying that is better i just write songs? If is that i agree with you, i'm a bad guitarist and even worse singer xD

Prospector · 07-12-2012, 11:33 PM

Cute song

, ok, let's think of names:
Silent Room
Nothing Left To Say
Back In Silence
Silent Noise
Silence
Peace treaty
Getting Over Pride

Whatever, nice song

TecHniCoLoR_MX · 08-12-2012, 02:14 AM

Great songs! Trying to think of a title? Let me try and help!

Quiet Riot
World's End
Calm Before The Storm

dms120 · 08-12-2012, 03:38 PM

Thanks for the names, but i already have one, i name it Unexpected. It's not that great but it fits

27-07-2012, 01:22 AM	#16
Twisted mind TICKLE TICKLE Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 12,114 Location: in FUCKLAND Chat posts: 33 Thanks given: 420 Thanked 1,035 Times in 446 Posts	And sorry, I can't think of anything else, it's too late now for my brain to work properly __________________ ~ DeviantArt ~ Coldplay Fanart thread Cologne 12.9.2008 Düsseldorf 27.8.2009 Wembley 19.9.2009 Cologne 15.12.2011 Cologne 4.9.2012 Leipzig 14.9.2012 Hannover 22.9.2012

29-07-2012, 10:48 PM	#18
Twisted mind TICKLE TICKLE Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 12,114 Location: in FUCKLAND Chat posts: 33 Thanks given: 420 Thanked 1,035 Times in 446 Posts	Okay so I tried finding some titles again: closed doors what's worse? mine is yours the past is the present locked now it's time wise madness wrong turns __________________ ~ DeviantArt ~ Coldplay Fanart thread Cologne 12.9.2008 Düsseldorf 27.8.2009 Wembley 19.9.2009 Cologne 15.12.2011 Cologne 4.9.2012 Leipzig 14.9.2012 Hannover 22.9.2012

07-12-2012, 11:33 PM	#22
Prospector Rafael Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 3,110 Location: Porto Alegre, Rio Grande do Sul, Brasil Gender: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 205 Thanked 181 Times in 130 Posts	Cute song , ok, let's think of names: Silent Room Nothing Left To Say Back In Silence Silent Noise Silence Peace treaty Getting Over Pride Whatever, nice song __________________ South American Ambassador 2012

08-12-2012, 02:14 AM	#23
TecHniCoLoR_MX My thoughts be of you Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 3,419 My Mood: Location: Northern California Gender: Country: Chat posts: 22 Thanks given: 616 Thanked 357 Times in 293 Posts	Great songs! Trying to think of a title? Let me try and help! Quiet Riot World's End Calm Before The Storm __________________ *4.28.12 San Jose*

30-07-2012, 12:43 AM	#19
dms120 Coldplayer Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 55 Location: Guimarães Gender: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 7 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts	Thanks for not quit this Some make sense others not... i love wise madness, it's an awesome name really but not for this song. But that name deserves a song not kiding xD now it's time fits but i dont think is the one. I just think in a name when i came to the forum xD I was thinking in a name that shows that the "she" of the song loses his pride and try to fix the things do you see? or she yield to love(i dont know the correct words ) I know I'm being boring, sorry, and thanks for the help

06-12-2012, 09:32 PM	#20
Comuris Coldplayer Join Date: Sep 2012 Posts: 28 Location: Eindhoven, The Netherlands Gender: Country: Seen CP: 1 times Fav. CP album: AROBTTH Fav. CP song: To may to choose Fav. CP member: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Its good i really like the second song but which music you would like make. so i can give you a little bit advice. I think it will be better if you have band, because if you don't your making music like Ed Sheeran ( not that its bad artist ) i don't know if you want that

07-12-2012, 04:25 PM	#21
dms120 Coldplayer Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 55 Location: Guimarães Gender: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 7 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts	Sorry, i dont understand what you said... your english is worse than mine Are you saying that is better i just write songs? If is that i agree with you, i'm a bad guitarist and even worse singer xD

08-12-2012, 03:38 PM	#24
dms120 Coldplayer Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 55 Location: Guimarães Gender: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 7 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts	Thanks for the names, but i already have one, i name it Unexpected. It's not that great but it fits