I wrote a sonnet using Coldplay lyrics.

Coldplaying@Hogwarts · 03-03-2010, 01:54 PM

He says in song he used to rule the world
The band plays as the butterflies cascade
He says there never was an honest word
The bass line and the church bells behind fade
For him, the confusion it never stops
He says he is going back to the start
The closing walls and all the ticking clocks
The questions cannot speak loud as his heart
He says that all the lights will guide you home
The stars that shine for all the things you do
The lights that guide you will ignite your bones
The stars are Yellow as his eyes are blue.
If you never try then you’ll never know
Just what you’re worth. It truly must be so.

Koala · 03-03-2010, 03:25 PM

He says that all the lights will guide you home
The stars are Yellow as his eyes are blue.

Jajajaja!! GReAT!
It truly must be so. ¿? where is it from?

Coldplaying@Hogwarts · 03-03-2010, 05:18 PM

Thanks!

The Final Track · 03-03-2010, 07:31 PM

lovely

BerrymanGirl1 · 03-03-2010, 07:48 PM

awesome!!

QuestionsOfScience · 03-03-2010, 08:34 PM

That's quite a nice poem you've got there.
But, I see that teh lyrics are a bit obvious in your poem, i mean if that's how you want your poem, that's great.
I do genuinely love that poem, I've seen some coldplay-themed poems, but this one is
the best.
Well done, just wondering...how long did it take you to write?

Coldplaying@Hogwarts · 03-03-2010, 08:50 PM

^ Five minutes.

Technicolor Sparks · 04-03-2010, 02:58 AM

Great poem!

I love sonnets.

geekchic · 04-03-2010, 04:49 AM

that's really quite beautiful
nice job!

Cobalt · 04-03-2010, 05:05 AM

Nay.

Destrokk · 04-03-2010, 05:07 AM

^So negative.

Cobalt · 04-03-2010, 05:08 AM

Nay? So negative? At least I didn't say "THIS SUCKS BALLS".

Destrokk · 04-03-2010, 05:15 AM

Well, that´s true.
You win again..

Cobalt · 04-03-2010, 05:16 AM

I just think that perhaps a bit more effort than 5 minutes would bring improvements.

xxKels · 04-03-2010, 08:28 AM

Nice job!

And i see Cobalts point- i think if you have done this well with a mere 5 minutes
of effort, you could do much more. Give it some time- even let it lay around a few days and just see what/ what else may come to you....

03-03-2010, 01:54 PM	#1
Coldplaying@Hogwarts Creator of the Cake Meme Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 2,454 My Mood: Location: Didn't get to heaven, but I made it close Gender: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 7 Times in 5 Posts	I wrote a sonnet using Coldplay lyrics. He says in song he used to rule the world The band plays as the butterflies cascade He says there never was an honest word The bass line and the church bells behind fade For him, the confusion it never stops He says he is going back to the start The closing walls and all the ticking clocks The questions cannot speak loud as his heart He says that all the lights will guide you home The stars that shine for all the things you do The lights that guide you will ignite your bones The stars are Yellow as his eyes are blue. If you never try then you’ll never know Just what you’re worth. It truly must be so. __________________ Taken by me on 7-29-12, at the Boston, MA concert. You're welcome. Keeper of: THE CLOCKS PIANO RIFF, Chris's sexy falsetto, Chris's sweatiness after performing a high-energy song, the Elvis impersonators in "Christmas Lights," the LOLdplay thread, LOLdplay Part II, Jonny's love of cake, "I don't mind not being cool" (Chris quote), the FUGPLAY thread, Major Minus, the Jimmy Kimmel Live "Lost and Found" skit, the 2008 SNL performance, the 2009 Grammys, the string section in Viva La Vida, Major Minus, Jonny's love of Sherlock Holmes, the moment when Chris hugged/fondled Guy's chest during "Viva La Vida" at the Liverpool Crisis concert, , "Who the fuck would wanna be king?" from the Liverpool Crisis gig performance of Viva La Vida, the Anton Corbijn music video for Viva La Vida, the Famous Old Painters instrumental leak, Major Minus, the rainbow walking man, all Mylo Xyloto-era graffiti, 'This is Jonny Buckland. He's our guitarist. He's my best friend and he wrote this song!', and MYLO XYLOTO. ...did I mention Major Minus? Quote: Originally Posted by Brent I mean if I had to choose the way I was going to die, Chris Martin running me over with a rolling desk chair would be at the top of the list. ~I LOVE ALTERNATIVE ROCK~ Coldplay: Mansfield, MA – Comcast Center – August 3, 2009 Green Day: Mansfield, MA – Comcast Center – August 16, 2010 Phoenix: Boston, MA – Agganis Arena – October 2010 Coldplay: Boston, MA – TD Garden – July 29, 2012

03-03-2010, 03:25 PM	#2
Koala Future needs a big KISS! Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 832 My Mood: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	He says that all the lights will guide you home The stars are Yellow as his eyes are blue. Jajajaja!! GReAT! It truly must be so. ¿? where is it from? __________________ Won't you join the dance?

03-03-2010, 05:18 PM	#3
Coldplaying@Hogwarts Creator of the Cake Meme Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 2,454 My Mood: Location: Didn't get to heaven, but I made it close Gender: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 7 Times in 5 Posts	Thanks! __________________ Taken by me on 7-29-12, at the Boston, MA concert. You're welcome. Keeper of: THE CLOCKS PIANO RIFF, Chris's sexy falsetto, Chris's sweatiness after performing a high-energy song, the Elvis impersonators in "Christmas Lights," the LOLdplay thread, LOLdplay Part II, Jonny's love of cake, "I don't mind not being cool" (Chris quote), the FUGPLAY thread, Major Minus, the Jimmy Kimmel Live "Lost and Found" skit, the 2008 SNL performance, the 2009 Grammys, the string section in Viva La Vida, Major Minus, Jonny's love of Sherlock Holmes, the moment when Chris hugged/fondled Guy's chest during "Viva La Vida" at the Liverpool Crisis concert, , "Who the fuck would wanna be king?" from the Liverpool Crisis gig performance of Viva La Vida, the Anton Corbijn music video for Viva La Vida, the Famous Old Painters instrumental leak, Major Minus, the rainbow walking man, all Mylo Xyloto-era graffiti, 'This is Jonny Buckland. He's our guitarist. He's my best friend and he wrote this song!', and MYLO XYLOTO. ...did I mention Major Minus? Quote: Originally Posted by Brent I mean if I had to choose the way I was going to die, Chris Martin running me over with a rolling desk chair would be at the top of the list. ~I LOVE ALTERNATIVE ROCK~ Coldplay: Mansfield, MA – Comcast Center – August 3, 2009 Green Day: Mansfield, MA – Comcast Center – August 16, 2010 Phoenix: Boston, MA – Agganis Arena – October 2010 Coldplay: Boston, MA – TD Garden – July 29, 2012

03-03-2010, 07:31 PM	#4
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03-03-2010, 08:34 PM	#6
QuestionsOfScience Bannana Juice Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 1,008 My Mood: Location: Wrapped Up In Books Gender: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	That's quite a nice poem you've got there. But, I see that teh lyrics are a bit obvious in your poem, i mean if that's how you want your poem, that's great. I do genuinely love that poem, I've seen some coldplay-themed poems, but this one is the best. Well done, just wondering...how long did it take you to write? __________________ M.M.I.X = Mr Martin is X-tremely cool. (thanks SuperFitz!) I'm sure you'll like my music... My facebook page: http://www.facebook.com/ArionXenos1 My Soundcloud page: http://soundcloud.com/arionxenos My Standard Grades are over!!

03-03-2010, 08:50 PM	#7
Coldplaying@Hogwarts Creator of the Cake Meme Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 2,454 My Mood: Location: Didn't get to heaven, but I made it close Gender: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 7 Times in 5 Posts	^ Five minutes. __________________ Taken by me on 7-29-12, at the Boston, MA concert. You're welcome. Keeper of: THE CLOCKS PIANO RIFF, Chris's sexy falsetto, Chris's sweatiness after performing a high-energy song, the Elvis impersonators in "Christmas Lights," the LOLdplay thread, LOLdplay Part II, Jonny's love of cake, "I don't mind not being cool" (Chris quote), the FUGPLAY thread, Major Minus, the Jimmy Kimmel Live "Lost and Found" skit, the 2008 SNL performance, the 2009 Grammys, the string section in Viva La Vida, Major Minus, Jonny's love of Sherlock Holmes, the moment when Chris hugged/fondled Guy's chest during "Viva La Vida" at the Liverpool Crisis concert, , "Who the fuck would wanna be king?" from the Liverpool Crisis gig performance of Viva La Vida, the Anton Corbijn music video for Viva La Vida, the Famous Old Painters instrumental leak, Major Minus, the rainbow walking man, all Mylo Xyloto-era graffiti, 'This is Jonny Buckland. He's our guitarist. He's my best friend and he wrote this song!', and MYLO XYLOTO. ...did I mention Major Minus? Quote: Originally Posted by Brent I mean if I had to choose the way I was going to die, Chris Martin running me over with a rolling desk chair would be at the top of the list. ~I LOVE ALTERNATIVE ROCK~ Coldplay: Mansfield, MA – Comcast Center – August 3, 2009 Green Day: Mansfield, MA – Comcast Center – August 16, 2010 Phoenix: Boston, MA – Agganis Arena – October 2010 Coldplay: Boston, MA – TD Garden – July 29, 2012

04-03-2010, 02:58 AM	#8
Technicolor Sparks shake it out Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 12,468 Gender: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Great poem! I love sonnets. __________________ & it's hard to dance with the devil on your back.

04-03-2010, 04:49 AM	#9
geekchic Coldplayer Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 980 My Mood: Gender: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	that's really quite beautiful nice job!

04-03-2010, 05:05 AM	#10
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04-03-2010, 05:07 AM	#11
Destrokk jef jefpoop Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 18,863 Location: Behind you. Gender: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 180 Thanked 408 Times in 222 Posts	^So negative.

04-03-2010, 05:08 AM	#12
Cobalt OH SUCH THE SHAME! Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 18,304 My Mood: Location: Melbourne, Australia Gender: Country: Chat posts: 10 Thanks given: 159 Thanked 173 Times in 120 Posts	Nay? So negative? At least I didn't say "THIS SUCKS BALLS". __________________ my quotes are old and my body is weary this space for rent

04-03-2010, 05:15 AM	#13
Destrokk jef jefpoop Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 18,863 Location: Behind you. Gender: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 180 Thanked 408 Times in 222 Posts	Well, that´s true. You win again.. __________________ no this is real

04-03-2010, 05:16 AM	#14
Cobalt OH SUCH THE SHAME! Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 18,304 My Mood: Location: Melbourne, Australia Gender: Country: Chat posts: 10 Thanks given: 159 Thanked 173 Times in 120 Posts	I just think that perhaps a bit more effort than 5 minutes would bring improvements. __________________ my quotes are old and my body is weary this space for rent

04-03-2010, 08:28 AM	#15
xxKels Account disabled Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 4,113 Location: On the mountain with Nick and my boys <3 Gender: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice job! And i see Cobalts point- i think if you have done this well with a mere 5 minutes of effort, you could do much more. Give it some time- even let it lay around a few days and just see what/ what else may come to you.... __________________