just a little song i wrote-do YOU like it?

OptimusPrime · 04-01-2003, 12:43 AM

I never wanted to do the things I did
But now I´m more sad than I thought I could get
I can´t change the past
but I´m not gonna hurt you again
I´m just gonna be a better man

chorus:

I´m sorry
that´s all I can say
I never wanted to hurt you this way
I never wanted to make you cry
cause you are my love
and you gotta fly

You´re my sweet everything and I hope not everything is lost forever
if that is the case I will be everything,but lucky?-Never.
I just sit here and cry
tired and lonely I forgot how
to fly

I forgot how to fly...
why?why?why?why?
I forgot how to fly...
I just sit here and cry...
why?why?why?why?
I just sit here and cry

repeat chorus(2x)

busybeeburns · 04-01-2003, 09:32 AM

Yeah that sounds cool, is there a tune to go with it, I'd sure like to hear the song to put it in

weedy_gonzalez · 04-01-2003, 04:40 PM

i fucking love it!!!!!!!! who is it about ? *being curious*

jewl* · 05-01-2003, 06:23 AM

wow!! i really like your song!!! i like to write songs and poems like that too!!!
*is tempted to write 1 *

jewl* · 05-01-2003, 06:35 AM

so many are alone, long forgotten.

so many are cold, old and rotton.

why do they deserve a life of pain?

left with visible scars that are their to remain?

so many are muted, so many are scared.

how long are they left not breathing?

how long are they alone and seeking?

they will find their way, they will find their way.

some are fresh, some are new

some are flesh, only a few.

their in their world of weighth and beauty

suffocated with their strong perfumes

while the others are repeating

" i have no meaning i have no meaning"

well they will know quite soon.

they will see quite soon...

jewl* · 05-01-2003, 06:36 AM

.... do i sound angry to yall or somthing???

i just re read it and now im tempted to take it off now...

dave's girl · 05-01-2003, 09:45 AM

i'm amazed - i didn't know we had such talented coldplayers :-D

weedy_gonzalez · 05-01-2003, 03:05 PM

that`s what i was going to say dave`s girl

Katharina · 05-01-2003, 05:49 PM

Such hidden talents in here - I am impressed! 8)

OptimusPrime · 05-01-2003, 08:46 PM

It´s about a very good friend of mine.
We were completely drunk on 31.Dec - 1Jan
and we had sex and we both regret it...

Katharina · 05-01-2003, 10:09 PM

Oops, that doesn't sound too good. I hope your friendship will survive even though...
Where are you from exactly and what's your real name?

::Hayley:: · 05-01-2003, 10:22 PM

now that i understand the meaning of your song i really realllllllllllly like it... :roll: hey you've got a great talent

bethany · 06-01-2003, 01:27 PM

put a tune to it if you haven't already done so, and then put it onto a site so we can listen. and send it off to people!

OptimusPrime · 06-01-2003, 05:45 PM

I´m from Germany and I´d love to put a tune to it,but I can´t play any instruments,all I can do is singing...

paulabenson · 06-01-2003, 05:48 PM

Hey OptimusPrime....your song is pretty cool but very sad

And jewl*....your poem is a wee gem

04-01-2003, 12:43 AM	#1
OptimusPrime Coldplayer Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 4 Location: Germany Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	just a little song i wrote-do YOU like it? I never wanted to do the things I did But now I´m more sad than I thought I could get I can´t change the past but I´m not gonna hurt you again I´m just gonna be a better man chorus: I´m sorry that´s all I can say I never wanted to hurt you this way I never wanted to make you cry cause you are my love and you gotta fly You´re my sweet everything and I hope not everything is lost forever if that is the case I will be everything,but lucky?-Never. I just sit here and cry tired and lonely I forgot how to fly I forgot how to fly... why?why?why?why? I forgot how to fly... I just sit here and cry... why?why?why?why? I just sit here and cry repeat chorus(2x)

04-01-2003, 09:32 AM	#2
busybeeburns mr coldplaying himself Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 46,331 My Mood: Location: test Gender: Country: Seen CP: 20 times Fav. CP album: X&Y Fav. CP song: GPASUYF Fav. CP member: Chat posts: 4 Thanks given: 1,547 Thanked 932 Times in 418 Posts	Yeah that sounds cool, is there a tune to go with it, I'd sure like to hear the song to put it in __________________ The early bird catches the worm. The second mouse gets the cheese!

04-01-2003, 04:40 PM	#3
weedy_gonzalez divalicious diva Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 11,609 Location: hackney, london Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i fucking love it!!!!!!!! who is it about ? being curious __________________ `I have to pee but when I come back I`d really like to continue talking about this conversation`

05-01-2003, 06:23 AM	#4
jewl* Coldplayer Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 3,213 Location: In a sea of faces Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	wow!! i really like your song!!! i like to write songs and poems like that too!!! is tempted to write 1 __________________ http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...th7502e6bf.bmp [scroll:5e73d999d1] absque tu ago nusquam [/scroll:5e73d999d1] <3 I love my Quoc Moon. <3 http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...Picture002.jpg Snapeybot: Do you think I could ever be a flagellant fetus?

05-01-2003, 06:35 AM	#5
jewl* Coldplayer Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 3,213 Location: In a sea of faces Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	so many are alone, long forgotten. so many are cold, old and rotton. why do they deserve a life of pain? left with visible scars that are their to remain? so many are muted, so many are scared. how long are they left not breathing? how long are they alone and seeking? they will find their way, they will find their way. some are fresh, some are new some are flesh, only a few. their in their world of weighth and beauty suffocated with their strong perfumes while the others are repeating " i have no meaning i have no meaning" well they will know quite soon. they will see quite soon... __________________ http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...th7502e6bf.bmp [scroll:5e73d999d1] absque tu ago nusquam [/scroll:5e73d999d1] <3 I love my Quoc Moon. <3 http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...Picture002.jpg Snapeybot: Do you think I could ever be a flagellant fetus?

05-01-2003, 06:36 AM	#6
jewl* Coldplayer Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 3,213 Location: In a sea of faces Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	.... do i sound angry to yall or somthing??? i just re read it and now im tempted to take it off now... __________________ http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...th7502e6bf.bmp [scroll:5e73d999d1] absque tu ago nusquam [/scroll:5e73d999d1] <3 I love my Quoc Moon. <3 http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...Picture002.jpg Snapeybot: Do you think I could ever be a flagellant fetus?

05-01-2003, 09:45 AM	#7
dave's girl Coldplayer Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 1,244 Location: Liverpool Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	i'm amazed - i didn't know we had such talented coldplayers :-D __________________ I forget everything I learn

05-01-2003, 03:05 PM	#8
weedy_gonzalez divalicious diva Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 11,609 Location: hackney, london Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	that`s what i was going to say dave`s girl __________________ `I have to pee but when I come back I`d really like to continue talking about this conversation`

05-01-2003, 05:49 PM	#9
Katharina Coldplayer Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,928 Location: Berlin, Germany Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Such hidden talents in here - I am impressed! 8) __________________ \"True romance in joy opposites is always the case when you only enjoy taking on all the colors that surround you...\" Check out songs from Sense Field\'s new album \"Living Outside\" and other SF classics here: http://www.nettwerkamerica.com/livingoutside

05-01-2003, 08:46 PM	#10
OptimusPrime Coldplayer Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 4 Location: Germany Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	It´s about a very good friend of mine. We were completely drunk on 31.Dec - 1Jan and we had sex and we both regret it...

05-01-2003, 10:09 PM	#11
Katharina Coldplayer Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,928 Location: Berlin, Germany Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Oops, that doesn't sound too good. I hope your friendship will survive even though... Where are you from exactly and what's your real name? __________________ \"True romance in joy opposites is always the case when you only enjoy taking on all the colors that surround you...\" Check out songs from Sense Field\'s new album \"Living Outside\" and other SF classics here: http://www.nettwerkamerica.com/livingoutside

05-01-2003, 10:22 PM	#12
::Hayley:: Old Skool Coldplay Fan Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 7,491 Location: Northern Ireland Gender: Country: Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 1 Post	now that i understand the meaning of your song i really realllllllllllly like it... :roll: hey you've got a great talent __________________ "No I don't wanna battle from beginning to end I don't want a cycle of recycled revenge I don't wanna follow Death and all his friends" "But if you never try you'll never know... Just what you're worth..." "Those who are dead Are not dead They're just living In my head" {Viva La Vida or Death and All His Friends}..."starts dark and ends light. A bit like Michael Jackson". - Chris, Q Magazine Interview. Issue : July 2008. Friday 19th December 2008 The Odyssey Arena Belfast The Best Gig Of My Life!

06-01-2003, 01:27 PM	#13
bethany Coldplayer Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 418 Location: in an existance full of beautiful mistakes Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	put a tune to it if you haven't already done so, and then put it onto a site so we can listen. and send it off to people! __________________ he who\'s album does not land number 1, ist ein loser...we\'re buzzing like fireflies, man. no words can express the joy of being in coldplay.

06-01-2003, 05:45 PM	#14
OptimusPrime Coldplayer Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 4 Location: Germany Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I´m from Germany and I´d love to put a tune to it,but I can´t play any instruments,all I can do is singing...

06-01-2003, 05:48 PM	#15
paulabenson Coldplayer Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 519 Location: london Chat posts: 0 Thanks given: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey OptimusPrime....your song is pretty cool but very sad And jewl*....your poem is a wee gem __________________ ...peace love & unity...

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