well is cool for the board to have many visitors but not that they crash the board
I don't know which username to use there, and this one is a board for all the CSI stories.
well i can upload the part i finished yesterday, and keep working on next one, i want they have a serious talk about his past.
and no problem is not the final version of the whole story yet, may be some things will change so it won't destroy the suspense. Plus it will help you with your spanish.
Hah, me too. Well the character is a seducer so it won't bother that he gets like that all the time, because is his behaviour.
yes in fact on the finished scene they talk a bit about his past... on the next one they will talk much more about it.
is ok, the board crashed.
i don't know why was so many people. rumours of next videoclip may be?
hehe good choices, but i prefer other avis. yesterday i thought to register on a csi board to get some spoilers
glad that you liked it, and congrats.
well i wanted to work on another scene today but my dad kidnapped my computer
anyways i have finished next scene i could upload it later today, i want to revise it yet.
really he asks too much each time? well, anyways i'm trying to show his dark side in the next scenes i am going to work today
(and i feel so tired, moment to check some fanvids again )
I just read it
I must admit there are words I dont understand. But I pretty much got the whole thing
Hehe, she's starting to open her heart to him. And man, he asks loads of questions each time, he never gives up It was nice to find out about her past, but it wasn't enough for 6 pages
nah nah, it has something, see she was confused and they have been more or less honest with each other, so i'm just letting it goes as it have to do, after all is a story
(really the parts are on other "side projects" of the story )
i guess some parts are easier to write, and i don't really know why, i know is strange that, i guess that i'm not that thinkful about some things if i write them in english.
i could show you just the part that goes after the one i've shown you.... but i warn you are 6 pages. (i reckon much short dialogues and really is a bit like the one i've shown you, well just she opens up)
i'm working on an interesting part now
excuses not, is true
why is disturbing? then is good, is nice to stare at avis
should i change it then? (i found a lot of avis of him )