french help please!!!!!!

[psychedelic_clocks]

I need help!!!!! right now!!
can someone whose really good in french help me with a paragraph i have to write about a girl in my class. i REALLY don't want to use the internet translator because its really NOT reliable and i would really like to get a GOOD mark on this but i have no clue, its been a year since i've last taken french so i would be EXTREMELY helpful is someone could help me...

[mycdplayerisbroke]

bonjour! :cool:

[psychedelic_clocks]

i might need a little more than that...
but good effort.

[mycdplayerisbroke]

bonjour madmoselle, como te llamas?

[musiclover]

clocks...put your paragraph here and i might be able to translate it for ya

[Sarah here]

isn't Como Te llamas Spanish?

[mycdplayerisbroke]

haha yeah

[psychedelic_clocks]

i have some sentences..but i dont think they're too great.

J'aimeras vous présenter mon amie. Elle s'appelle Dora. Elle est 16 ans. she has a brother and two turtles. She used to have two lizards and two newts, but they died. Her favourite tv show is The Simpsons. Her favourite food is spaghetti. She enjoys singing and dancing. Dora is usually happy and she likes to laugh a lot. she would like to travel to austrailia.

[mycdplayerisbroke]

She used to have two lizards and two newts, but they died

are you serious?
like anyone is going to go to france and say that
"i had 2 lizards but they died..."

[psychedelic_clocks]

clearly i was joking.

[mycdplayerisbroke]

oh
my bad...

[psychedelic_clocks]

alright..
but i still need help. my mind is so whipped. i cant think properly. grr arrg.

[punks united]

I can help u if u still need it :)

i am in my second year french honors class

[psychedelic_clocks]

yes!! i need help!
DESPERATELY!

[punks united]

okay...what do u need help on?

[psychedelic_clocks]

J'aimeras vous présenter mon amie. Elle s'appelle Dora. Elle est 16 ans. she has a brother and two turtles. She used to have two lizards and two newts, but they died. Her favourite tv show is The Simpsons. Her favourite food is spaghetti. She enjoys singing and dancing. Dora is usually happy and she likes to laugh a lot. she would like to travel to austrailia.

mostly translating that

[punks united]

elle a un frere and deux tortues. Elle a eu deux lezards et deux tritons, mais ils sont morts. Son programme favori est <<The Simpsons>>. Elle prefere le spagheti. Elle aime chanter et elle aime danser. Elle est heureuse d'habitude et elle aime rire beacoup. Elle voudrait voyager en Australie.


* If in the beginning of your paragraph u are trying to say i would like to present you would say Je voudrais vous presenter mon amie :)

Hope this helped u :)

[psychedelic_clocks]

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[punks united]

UR SOOOO WELCOME!!!

I feel so useful :)

[psychedelic_clocks]

hahahaha
thanks again!

[punks united]

yep :)

[punks united]

did u get the new phantom planet cd??

I think it is okay but definitely not as good as the first :)

[el_scorcho]

I found an error :stunned: You put "Elle est 16 ans" but it should be "Elle a 16 ans". :)

[Danilo]

I found an error :stunned: You put "Elle est 16 ans" but it should be "Elle a 16 ans". :)

très bien professeur

[Leaver]

. Sa série préférée s'appelle <<les Simpsons>>. Son plat favori sont les spagheti. Elle aime chanter et danser. Elle est souvent heureuse et aime beaucoup rire . Elle voudrait voyager en Australie.
by a french :dozey:

[Angel at his table]

Und sprechen sie Deutsch? :wink3:

[el_scorcho]

I found an error :stunned: You put "Elle est 16 ans" but it should be "Elle a 16 ans". :)

très bien professeur

Oh merci merci ;)

[Danilo]

I found an error :stunned: You put "Elle est 16 ans" but it should be "Elle a 16 ans". :)

très bien professeur

Oh merci merci ;)

veuillez apprendre français avec vous

[Charline'sMOM]

psychodelic cloccks est un cochon.
Je suis fatigue(dont how to type the accent)
aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh its 7:05am and im at school
WHYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!! ahhhhhhhhh so early

[el_scorcho]

Ew boycott school :cool:

[Charline'sMOM]

school pisses me off........but im meeting here to go to a hockey tournament
soooooo.ahhhhhhh soooooooooooooooo tired!!!!!!

[el_scorcho]

Ohhh coolio, you play hockey?

[Charline'sMOM]

yeah i gotsta go ....taxis are here

[el_scorcho]

Have fun wheeeee! :D

[punks united]

lea...trying to steal my glory??

[Leaver]

no :embarrased:

[punks united]

jk...i was just tryin' to say that you probably have learned a lot more french than i have... :)

[Leaver]

as i'm french :dozey:

[punks united]

vraiment?

[psychedelic_clocks]

AH ZUT ALORS!!!!
J'EN AI ASSEZ!!!!!!

[Leaver]

assez de quoi? :stunned: