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Coldplaying@Hogwarts
03-03-2010, 01:54 PM
:)

He says in song he used to rule the world
The band plays as the butterflies cascade
He says there never was an honest word
The bass line and the church bells behind fade
For him, the confusion it never stops
He says he is going back to the start
The closing walls and all the ticking clocks
The questions cannot speak loud as his heart
He says that all the lights will guide you home
The stars that shine for all the things you do
The lights that guide you will ignite your bones
The stars are Yellow as his eyes are blue.
If you never try then you’ll never know
Just what you’re worth. It truly must be so.

Koala
03-03-2010, 03:25 PM
He says that all the lights will guide you home
The stars are Yellow as his eyes are blue.


Jajajaja!! GReAT!
It truly must be so. ¿? where is it from?

Coldplaying@Hogwarts
03-03-2010, 05:18 PM
Thanks! :nice:

The Final Track
03-03-2010, 07:31 PM
:heart: lovely

BerrymanGirl1
03-03-2010, 07:48 PM
awesome!!:awesome:

QuestionsOfScience
03-03-2010, 08:34 PM
That's quite a nice poem you've got there.
But, I see that teh lyrics are a bit obvious in your poem, i mean if that's how you want your poem, that's great.
I do genuinely love that poem, I've seen some coldplay-themed poems, but this one is
the best.
Well done, just wondering...how long did it take you to write?

Coldplaying@Hogwarts
03-03-2010, 08:50 PM
^ Five minutes. :nice:

Technicolor Sparks
04-03-2010, 02:58 AM
Great poem! :nice:
I love sonnets. :wacky:

geekchic
04-03-2010, 04:49 AM
that's really quite beautiful
nice job!

Cobalt
04-03-2010, 05:05 AM
Nay.

Destrokk
04-03-2010, 05:07 AM
^So negative.

Cobalt
04-03-2010, 05:08 AM
Nay? So negative? At least I didn't say "THIS SUCKS BALLS".

Destrokk
04-03-2010, 05:15 AM
Well, that´s true.
You win again.. :uneasy:

Cobalt
04-03-2010, 05:16 AM
I just think that perhaps a bit more effort than 5 minutes would bring improvements.

xxKels
04-03-2010, 08:28 AM
Nice job!:D

And i see Cobalts point- i think if you have done this well with a mere 5 minutes
of effort, you could do much more. Give it some time- even let it lay around a few days and just see what/ what else may come to you....