just a little song i wrote-do YOU like it?

[OptimusPrime]

I never wanted to do the things I did
But now I´m more sad than I thought I could get
I can´t change the past
but I´m not gonna hurt you again
I´m just gonna be a better man

chorus:

I´m sorry
that´s all I can say
I never wanted to hurt you this way
I never wanted to make you cry
cause you are my love
and you gotta fly

You´re my sweet everything and I hope not everything is lost forever
if that is the case I will be everything,but lucky?-Never.
I just sit here and cry
tired and lonely I forgot how
to fly

I forgot how to fly...
why?why?why?why?
I forgot how to fly...
I just sit here and cry...
why?why?why?why?
I just sit here and cry

repeat chorus(2x)

[busybeeburns]

Yeah that sounds cool, is there a tune to go with it, I'd sure like to hear the song to put it in :D

[weedy_gonzalez]

i fucking love it!!!!!!!! who is it about ? *being curious*

[jewl*]

wow!! i really like your song!!! i like to write songs and poems like that too!!!
*is tempted to write 1 *

[jewl*]

so many are alone, long forgotten.

so many are cold, old and rotton.

why do they deserve a life of pain?

left with visible scars that are their to remain?

so many are muted, so many are scared.

how long are they left not breathing?

how long are they alone and seeking?

they will find their way, they will find their way.

some are fresh, some are new

some are flesh, only a few.

their in their world of weighth and beauty

suffocated with their strong perfumes

while the others are repeating

" i have no meaning i have no meaning"

well they will know quite soon.

they will see quite soon...

[jewl*]

.... do i sound angry to yall or somthing???

i just re read it and now im tempted to take it off now...

[dave's girl]

i'm amazed - i didn't know we had such talented coldplayers :-D

[weedy_gonzalez]

that`s what i was going to say dave`s girl

[Katharina]

Such hidden talents in here - I am impressed! 8)

[OptimusPrime]

It´s about a very good friend of mine.
We were completely drunk on 31.Dec - 1Jan
and we had sex and we both regret it...

[Katharina]

Oops, that doesn't sound too good. I hope your friendship will survive even though...
Where are you from exactly and what's your real name?

[::Hayley::]

now that i understand the meaning of your song i really realllllllllllly like it... :roll: hey you've got a great talent :)

[bethany]

put a tune to it if you haven't already done so, and then put it onto a site so we can listen. and send it off to people!

[OptimusPrime]

I´m from Germany and I´d love to put a tune to it,but I can´t play any instruments,all I can do is singing...

[paulabenson]

Hey OptimusPrime....your song is pretty cool but very sad :shrug:
And jewl*....your poem is a wee gem ;)

[Katharina]

I´m from Germany and I´d love to put a tune to it,but I can´t play any instruments,all I can do is singing...

I can see you're German and a guy... But where exactly are you from and what is your name??

[bethany]

so sing it onto a tape, and send it to someone here who can put some chords to it or whatever

[jewl*]

Hey OptimusPrime....your song is pretty cool but very sad :shrug:
And jewl*....your poem is a wee gem ;)

* confused...*
:-o

[jewl*]

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

depressing and angry when im not! im gonna take it down now!

[paulabenson]

Hey OptimusPrime....your song is pretty cool but very sad :shrug:
And jewl*....your poem is a wee gem ;)

* confused...*

:-o

It's a play on words....jewel-as in precious-as in gem.
Didn't mean to confuse you...it's very good ...very heartfelt and your very brave to put up your poetry...go for it ;)

[jewl*]

Hey OptimusPrime....your song is pretty cool but very sad :shrug:
And jewl*....your poem is a wee gem ;)

* confused...*

:-o

It's a play on words....jewel-as in precious-as in gem.
Didn't mean to confuse you...it's very good ...very heartfelt and your very brave to put up your poetry...go for it ;)

oh! thankyou... i dont know if i should take it down... i think i need to write things that need to be a bit happier..

[AngelicJan]

awwwwwwww *blub* :sad:
bootiful.

[Hicksy]

let me see that thoooooong :D

[Guy'sChick]

:o :shrug:

[AngelicJan]

let me see that thoooooong :D

oh gush :roll: :roll:

[jewl*]

huh?

[::Hayley::]

let me see that thoooooong :D

i've got Sisquo's Thong Song in my head now :shock:

[bethany]

so have i...dammit, i'd forgotten that song existed

[::Hayley::]

so have i...dammit, i'd forgotten that song existed

lol :D

[Hicksy]

he he - dont you all just love me so :D

that thong thong thong thong thong

*cue funky gyrating hip dance*

:D

[fifi]

*cue funky gyrating hip dance*

:D
;) lol :lol: :lol:

[jewl*]

awww! :)