Another song inspired by Coldplay

[Talvin]

Hi folks!

After "You & Me" I've just finished a first demo of another song which was inspired by Coldplay. The song is called "Honesty (is what we don't need now).

You can listen to it here:

http://www.kara-moon.com/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=2058.0;attach=1990

Please let me know what you think. :) Has the ending been taken from another Coldplay song or does it just remind me of something?

http://www.myspace.com/talvinjones

[Talvin]

So did anyone have a listen? :rolleyes:

[Talvin]

This is the latest mix of the song:

http://www.kara-moon.com/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=2058.0;attach=2013

I'd be happy if someone had a listen and would tell me what she/he thinks. It's a lot of work to play all the instruments and do the mixing alone and I'd really appreciate an honest feedback (I can't afford Mr Eno :)).
By the way, all instruments are virtual, that is there are no real instruments in the song (although it may sound so :cool:)

[shipoffools]

Very nice. :) I like your singing voice, and the music is very catchy and interesting. And I think you did a great job on the mixing, too, it sounds really professional.

Do you have an album out? I'd love to hear more of your songs.

[Talvin]

Thanks. :) I really appreciate feedback and I'm happy you like the song.

I record all my songs alone at home, so unfortunately I have no album out. You can have a listen to some of my songs here though

http://www.kara-moon.com/index.php?modid=mod03&l_submenu_id=m001_03_06&artist=Talvin%20Jones

...or visit my Myspace site:

http://www.myspace.com/talvinjones


The song where you can hear the Coldplay influence most is probably "You & Me", but I started using that delay in many other songs as well.