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[Reilly]

This is a song I wrote a couple hours ago about my ex girlfriend, I still love her, but jeesus, what a bitch. Notice my particular nastiness in the 2nd verse.

It looks short, its about 3 mins long, so it is fairly short. Here goes...



Its Growing


Of all the things, you hold close to your skin
Im a breath away, but Im still nothing
And I heard, the screaming
And I heard, the passer-by

If you keep acting this way, there will be no-one at your grave
And I cant think of one thing, that makes you a human being
And I heard, the screaming
And I heard, the passer-by

Its growing

[DrPolitik]

*sees*
COOL
*will be returning here in the future. Plants Dr.P flag. salutes the air*

[fifi]

:lol: thats good reilly ;)

[Reilly]

Thank youuuu!

[el_scorcho]

*applause* Very nice Reilly :)

[sky]

wonderful :lol:

[ShibbNani]

*is afraid to post her lyrics*

:confused:

[Kettercat]

*thumbs up* very good Reilly!

I haven't written anything good for ages, but here's my latest crap:

Down On Me
It's raining down again
This time it's raining on me
I'm sitting here in silence
Thinking what happened
To what we used to be

I've said my sorry's
And I've expressed my pain
But she won't listen
So I'm sitting down
Watching the rain

Take a good look at me
Tell me, what do you see?
Is it the man you used to know?
Is it the man I used to be?
Take a look at me now
Before you turn the lights
Down on me

I showed up at her doorstep
Brought some roses too
Talked about the countless
Nights and days
I'd spend "thinking of you"

I've said my sorry's
And I've expressed my pain
But she won't listen
So I'm sitting down
Bleeding with the rain

Take a good look at me
Tell me, what do you see?
Is it the man you used to know?
Is it the man I used to be?
Take a look at me now
Before you turn the lights
Down on me

You know I never meant to make you cry
I never meant for it to end this way
I am lost on my own
I'm so cold, soaked to the bone
Instead on falling on my feet
I've fallen on my back
Now I can't seem to find
The right track...

Take a good look at me
Tell me, what do you see?
Is it the man you used to know?
Is it the man I used to be?
Take a look at me now
Before you turn the lights
Down on me

Take a good look at me
Tell me, what do you see?
Is it the man you used to know?
Is it the man I used to be?
Take a look at me now
Before you turn the lights
Down on me...


(Yup, I know it sounds a lot like the Stereophonics' 'Since I Told You It's Over', that was my inspiration :))

[Reilly]

OMG! I thought you were a woman!

You learn something new everyday. Poor Jacob :S

Hahaha I kid, great stuff. :D