Poetry thread..

[Naughtyfig]

What the winds bring they bring
My heart is still hard, cold, frozen
I tumble and fall
People rush by me
Stampeding
Trampling
Kicking
Laughing
Cursing
Spitting
Crying
I lie there
It seems fitting for the moment
The sky a pretty grey
Rain falls
Freezing as it hits
With every blink of my eye
Life seems to get taken down a notch
A child stops over me and lets a pink rose glide out of her tiny, beautiful hands
Smiles as the rose gently rests on my breasts
Her mother concerned about the looks of the others pulls the child along
My blinking is longer
Life gets slower
Slower almost stopping
I feel my hair fall nicely along my face and the raindrops pet it with sincere pity
The clouds part for just a moment
My eyes close
Never to open again
---- ------------------------------------------------

[busybeeburns]

:)

[Hicksy]

a
lemur
lept

*why thank you* :D

[hollybelle]

:P ;)

[Sweet One]

*applause for all the poems* :-D

[Hicksy]

i dont know where it came from

it just happened :shock:

[Sweet One]

a natural talent Simon.. ;)

[hollybelle]

you were inspired!! Good job. lol :D

[Naughtyfig]

here's another...
Standing at the edge
Pondering
Should I
Should I jump
I turn around to look at what I’d leave behind
Nothing
As I thought
Nothing
Nothing except pain and neglect
I hear voices
I hear the same voices I’ve heard all through my life
The ones that have hammered their way into my deepest thoughts
Leaving their piercing laughter as souvenirs
I see faces dancing through the mist
Faces wearing smirks
Like they always have
I hate those faces
But they too have stolen my vision
I can’t see the roses in the garden
I can’t see the stars at night
I see them
And only them
I don’t close my eyes anymore
Nothing good happens when I do that
My dreams are horrid
My heart aches
My soul lost
My burden heavier
My mind even more confused
Standing at the edge
I look over
The sprays of waves greet my lips
Reminds of what life used to be
I jump
Not into the empty ocean
But into something new
Into a heavenly abyss

[Naughtyfig]

god ppl come in and post... :o

[Dania]

there was agirl from syracuse who couldn't tie her shoes :?

[Hicksy]

:shock:

[Naughtyfig]

AHAHAHA...umm
there was a cat
that was sitting on a mat
and then a kid ran in the room and hit it with a cricket bat
and the cat's puggy stomach went splat
and then out of its stomach flew out a rat
the kids mum walked in and saaw the mess and started to rant
then yanked the kid up by the leg of his pant
took of her straw hat
and then spanked him while yelling.."you're bad..a bad boy indeed you are Pat!!!!!!!""
:o :twisted: :D :D

[Dania]

LOL :D

[Hicksy]

:shock:

[Naughtyfig]

oh that was an award winning poem and u ppl know it... :roll:
Dania= Elissa right??

[i heart chrismartin]

wow Simon you're so talented lol

nice poems!

[Hicksy]

and today i am inspired to write a poem about my first love - badgers

a badger
is a curious thing
it growls and snuffles and scrabbles for things
they look like you could cuddle them but
oh no!
if you do they may try to bite your big toe!
so let this be a lesson to all that have learnt
a badger is not an animal to pet or to hurt
you should respect them and love them from afar just like me
with cream buns and croissants and skittles for tea

yay! im great i am :D

[Hicksy]

*bump* because i am so damn impressed with myself :D

[CatDubh]

In your arms, rocking I am
quietly.
In my arms, rocking you are
quietly.
In your arms I am a child,
listening.
In my arms you're a child,
I'm listening
With your arms you hold me tight
when I am scared.
With my arms I hold you tight
and I'm not scared.
In your arms, even the
silence of death won't
frighten me.
In your arms I'll fall
through death like
a dream.

[Hicksy]

nice poem

but it has no badgers in it :sad:

[Dania]

oh that was an award winning poem and u ppl know it... :roll:
Dania= Elissa right??

don't know what ur on bout there but welcome to the board

[Dania]

This pain is very, very slow.
it has been so for many years
it has been so for many tears :cry:

[::Hayley::]

I like this thread :D good idea

We had a poetry essay in school yesterday and I really liked one of the poems we were given to compare with another...

Take your own meaning from it :-) i think it is about a relationship being over and the poet wants to part from his lover on an optimistic note..

The Parting

Since there's no help, come let us kiss and part--
Nay, I have done, you get no more of me;
And I am glad, yea, glad with all my heart,
That thus so cleanly I myself can free.
Shake hands for ever, cancel all our vows,
And when we meet at any time again,
Be it not seen in either of our brows
That we one jot of former love retain.
Now at the last gasp of Love's latest breath,
When, his pulse failing, Passion speechless lies,
When Faith is kneeling by his bed of death,
And innocence is closing up his eyes,
--Now if thou wouldst, when all have given him over,
From death to life thou might'st him yet recover.

~ Michael Drayton

[Hicksy]

still no badgers :sad:

[Hicksy]

how can it have been all day and no-one has commentated on my badger poem i mean AAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH H!!!!!!!!!!


what has a talented poet got to write to inspire you people? a poem about porn? :shock:

:sad:

[Hicksy]

fine everyone ignore me

see what i care :cry:

[Dania]

hey I love ur badger poem its lovely!!!
(rught I think Ibetter go and read it now) LOL

[Dania]

more badger poems please

[hollybelle]

awwwwww very cute!!

and today i am inspired to write a poem about my first love - badgers

a badger
is a curious thing
it growls and snuffles and scrabbles for things
they look like you could cuddle them but
oh no!
if you do they may try to bite your big toe!
so let this be a lesson to all that have learnt
a badger is not an animal to pet or to hurt
you should respect them and love them from afar just like me
with cream buns and croissants and skittles for tea

yay! im great i am :D

[::Hayley::]

i read your badger poem hicksy and i am darn impressed lol

is it your own creation?? good work :-D

[hollybelle]

;)

[Hicksy]

thanx guys

it was all me - i was quite shocked :D

i will endeavour to follow up with badgers 2 some time next week :)

[i heart chrismartin]

i liked the badgers poem! lol

[Naughtyfig]

Badgers RULE WOOOOHOOOO.... :D

[Dania]

Badgers RULE WOOOOHOOOO.... :D


you didn't even comment on my poem :cry: :(

[::Hayley::]

AHAHAHA...umm
there was a cat
that was sitting on a mat
and then a kid ran in the room and hit it with a cricket bat
and the cat's puggy stomach went splat
and then out of its stomach flew out a rat
the kids mum walked in and saaw the mess and started to rant
then yanked the kid up by the leg of his pant
took of her straw hat
and then spanked him while yelling.."you're bad..a bad boy indeed you are Pat!!!!!!!""
:o :twisted: :D :D


woo what a poem :lol:

[God]

i want more badger poems!

[Hicksy]

sorry dania - it was very ickle

its really sad :sad:

*hugs dania*

[::Hayley::]

yeah Dania i liked it too. is it your own poem?

[God]

you poem is very sad dania, and very beautiful.

[Victoria]

Some mighty poems in here. Some mighty poets too.

Here's one I like:

For no other reason than I love him wholly, I am here.
For this one night, at least,
The world has shrunk to this boyish breast
Upon which my head, brilliant and exhausted, rests.
And I can know of nothing more complete.

Has anyone else ever felt like this? :)

[God]

yeah :D

[Victoria]

:D 8)

[hollybelle]

This pain is very, very slow.
it has been so for many years
it has been so for many tears :cry:

I can relate to this. still....

[Naughtyfig]

Badgers RULE WOOOOHOOOO.... :D


you didn't even comment on my poem :cry: :(

my bad.. :( :( :(

It was short ans sweet...
u should try to expand it..

[Dania]

thank u I will try and expand it
more poetry please lois!!!

[cold_kitty]

give me pills
wipe my tears
stop my shakes
ease my fears
fix me please
like you would
make me better
oh if you could

[Hicksy]

i would :sad:

if only someone would let me

[Naughtyfig]

I walk down this stony path
With no one here to guide me
I see pretty visions among the trees
But no voices or music to accompany the show
I see blooming flowers and dripping hhoney
With no bees or butterflies to grace them
I am alone and afraid
But I keep going..
(will extend this when I get home..)

[Chrissy]

sooo profesional!

[athy]

great :)

[hollybelle]

...very nice.....!!!

[Naughtyfig]

I walk down this stony path
With no one here to guide me
I see pretty visions among the trees
But no voices or music to accompany the show
I see blooming flowers and dripping hhoney
With no bees or butterflies to grace them
I am alone and afraid
But I keep going..
There's no light at the end of this path nor is there a heaven waiting for me
I walk because there is nothing left for me to do
Life isnt that rewarding for me to be settled
I walk because I wont have to think much
Thinking is strain
I now figure that walking alone is being w/ out distraction
That's resting
Down the path I continue to go...

[Dania]

I enjoyed that lois very nice :D

[hollybelle]

He's in a New York minute now
and me i'm stuck in the longest hour
thinking of him thinking of you
it's always that way even before we met
i knew that you were for me and i was for you.
Why can't you see it?
Give me something to hope for to believe in love again.

[Chrissy]

:cry:

[Naughtyfig]

Nothing comes this easy
Should I just fall into the moment?
I analyze too much
This takes the joy out of spontaneity
Before I realize it..
It will be long gone...
I wont be able to capture it in a tiny little bottle.....memory..
Caught up in its sweeping gale of wind
It leaves me a kiss on my lips
Beforeing taking its place in my wishful thinking...

[Naughtyfig]

I'm jogging down this hill and I Ttrip..
Instead of tumbling down the hill..
Rolling on the loose gravel and gritty sand..
I slide slowly and gently..
Down on my back...
I have enough time..
To see the children laughing at me..
To see the concerned look of the clouds that have stopped to cry for me in the sky..
I am sliding down this hill..
Not with the usual feeling of cherry blosssoming on my cheeks..
But with a winter's wind brushing past my face..
I am sliding down with the end near...
I dont want to stop..
But I have too...
I have to get up ...
I have to get up...
I have to get up ...

[LiquidSky]

I want to write a poem too, but I don't want to right now, maybe later on... :D

[Naughtyfig]

cool..I'll be waiting for it!

[TriflesAndEvils]

the childless plates are all full
Hiding our lights from the deep of the shoulders
And their eyes are all filled with those fighting images
the happiness pillaged
the rooms are all lonely , planes flying circles , bombs are in focus ,

and now I cant keep these images from my mind.... in from mind

And my mind thats been damaged by anothers opinion,
dreams have been stricken ,
all very wicked in making
The stars are all pulsating
waiting for something thats came out of them ,
People revolting wanting all pain to pour out
of The pits of their being

Happiness is all dying' to meet its maker
people all faking to read into one happy dream
sleeping walking days have met clumsy fame
how unhappy it is to be bombing
coming from talking of those set in war
people revolting all filled with those images
the rooms are all empty , planes flying circles , bombs are all dropping like jaws made of glass.

Rights have been dominated , Like crops being cultivated ,
running the truth , telling all stories , of bombings and storage ,

And people wish quitely for dreams they seek inside of me ,
This dream is over , Make room for two others ,
Your friend and five others ,
All joining hands and running for cover,
people revolting and talking of words
the beds are all slept in, planes flying circles,decending on innocent

Anything walking could be a threat to many pretending to help.
Helpless bodies
walking in order of that which they have been called

Oh how they have fallen , Oh how could we have known , Oh how happy we are to be free, Free From the bombing

...Free from the freedom of living , Oh how happy we are..

There might be more to fighting , summing up all events quite relentlessly ,
hiding from threats in privacy of those with the higher hand, of which we all are big fans
Read all words before they disappear ,
Sometimes their meanings can be lost to the air,
Of those who breathe deeper then and far much cheaper

In rest we are all hopeless Sadly unfocused ,
Curious to how one will react to the past that seems flat
How the brain will lead in quest for that unseen ,
While those people are all dropping like heavy rain
They seemed to have lost at the one biggest game.

Oh how they have fallen , Oh how could we have known , Oh how happy we are to be freed, sadly we conquer and now there is some hope left in the air , oh how happy we are...

[Naughtyfig]

NICE

[hollybelle]

;) very nice to both poems!!

[TriflesAndEvils]

And im tearing down the ocean waves,
As they make a way through my chest,
I don=t breathe for I won't speak ,
The twilight it is shining down,
Bending it cuts through the water's wall,
It has kept me here.....
For I am in question,
And here I am found drowned from all of my fears....
My memory is ever fading...
Though I will never grow old like you,
Death is haunting me still...
My hands will never know what is true,
beauty we find To be all in my mind,
So everyone screams this way!,
The abstract thoughts come bursting
Into your blistering hands.
And not one could ever find them,
buried in your deepest sleep........
Its these secrets you keep in my passing,
You find you could love once more,
And you look down to the sea,
and watch your memory and everything more,
The light will reflect off the ocean shore , Bending to shine into you hands where you can keep him warm ,
For you can't speak a word of the Pain you had caused ,
With this word you could never reflect time ,
Time reflects you ,
Bending to meet in your skin.....
And light shone down,
claiming the few intimate sounds....
of your future....
and no one could know how warm you sleep inside your mind..
look down towards the dark..
there are sparks that draw themselves into the sky...
look down towards the sand...
there are rubies that glimmer in the shade............
making a place for their parade.
For above it all the sun burns...
waiting to shine its way into your heart...
But you will make water from your eyes...
Those tears the sun will never see!...
Her heart will pound for you and the loss she feels as her body groans...
she feels you never could have left...
but your cold body suggests...
you will never be again...
The ocean waves and cries with lights in its eyes you will never be again!
...
You will crash upon the shore with a hand that reaches for another...
You will never feel again.

[Naughtyfig]

I luv it..post more dude! :-D :-D

[Dania]

bump

[Naughtyfig]

Blah, blah, blah she speaks
Her voice
A hammer breaking glass
A chisel against marble
A finger nail across a chalk board
It echoes through out his mind
Her words
Closing in on his every thought
A very unbearable burden
It crushes him
The pain intense
Like lying out flat on a bed of nails and having a boulder fall on you
His eyes
Troubled
Dark
Hard
Lost
His voice
Gone
Silenced by her brutality
Feeble is what he is now
Her touch
Ice cold
Yet
Severely scotching
Her gaze
Like a thousand silver bullets coming straight at you
And all hitting more than once
She raises every strand of hair on his body
She completely stops his heart
Takes his breath away
Brings him to his knees
Watches him tremble
Then leaves
Amazing
Devilishly amazing

__________________

[Victoria]

The lights from the parlour and kitchen shone out
Through the blinds and the windows and bars;
And high overhead and all moving about,
There were thousands of millions of stars.

There ne'er were such thousands of leaves on a tree,
Nor of people in church or the park,
As the crowds of the stars that looked down upon me,
And that glittered and winked in the dark.

The Dog, and the Plough, and the Hunter, and all,
And the star of the sailor, and Mars,
These shone in the sky, and the pail by the wall
Would be half full of water and stars.

They saw me at last, and they chased me with cries,
And they soon had me packed into bed;
But the glory kept shining and bright in my eyes,
And the stars going round in my head.

(Robert Louis Stevenson)

:) That poem always gives me goosepimples! :)

[Naughtyfig]

awww ......its very nice... :)

[hollybelle]

i like it.
This is a great thread!!! Lots of talent!! ;)

Holly

[Naughtyfig]

post something Holly :)

[hollybelle]

later, i promise ;)
too busy right now- at work

[Naughtyfig]

okay..I'll be waiting :)

[DrPolitik]

can i butt in? :) I love poetry, have been "attempting" :oops: it for a few years now, this is one I wrote yesterday:

I am pen run over your pages,
blue streams between the lines
I cross to be with you;
contours raised above
the blank space between us.

I am a bootleg,
with songs for you,
recorded long ago
from pirate stations.
Light a candle, watch the rain,
listen to the crackled end.
Do not pay for me,
though I have a price.
Copy me,
I am unprotected.

cya around, Greg

[hollybelle]

ooooh I like very much. ;)

Welcome to the Board!!

Holly :)

[Hicksy]

so many artistic people, i love it :)

[DrPolitik]

how 'bout poems about coldplay? I'll try a little freestyle off the top of the head about 16/4/03 e.c. i went to:

Oh, the girls in the front want "shiver,"
so I hear. They're draped in gossamers
that the piano threads, the lights all shimmer
and the singer's perched in his web.
The girls cry "shiver,"
but the singer
plays something else instead.

[Naughtyfig]

can i butt in? :) I love poetry, have been "attempting" :oops: it for a few years now, this is one I wrote yesterday:

I am pen run over your pages,
blue streams between the lines
I cross to be with you;
contours raised above
the blank space between us.

I am a bootleg,
with songs for you,
recorded long ago
from pirate stations.
Light a candle, watch the rain,
listen to the crackled end.
Do not pay for me,
though I have a price.
Copy me,
I am unprotected.

cya around, Greg

very very very nice poem....
*sitting ovation*.. :o :D ..ahaha

but do post another one..
if I were PMS'ing I'd porrly be awwwing and sniffling now..its sweet

[DrPolitik]

thanks very much! I've got 100s and 100s so i'll post a few more maybe...just did a little one about cp, hope you like it :)

[Naughtyfig]

hey greg..do post all of them...I'll definitely read them..

[hollybelle]

me too ;)

[Naughtyfig]

Pick me out from beneath the thorns
Please hearing me crying out for your touch
My throat is dry and aching
Hear before I lose my voice
Pick me out from beneath the thorns
Please inhale my beautiful aroma
Let it left all your fears and burdens away
Pick me out from beneath the thorns
Before the rain drowns in its anger
Before the sun buns me up from his lust
Before the ants and wondering kittens do away with me
Pick me out from beneath the thorns
For I have been waiting ah many years for you

[Naughtyfig]

My coldplay poem....
________

I close my eyes
Let the music kiss my soul
I hear his voice high above my sea of thoughts
Drowning out the breaking of their waves
"In my place"....he's in my place
Weaving the perfect web for me to rest...
I fall back gently gliding on his every word..
His voice a melody soo sweet and soothing...
His eyes loose in their blueness..
I love it..
No greater feeling in the world..
\/
(Its coldplay on the stereo)....... :shrug:

[DrPolitik]

Both very cool! Some great lines in that 1st one esp. "Pick me out from beneath the thorns" nice, very nice and I love the line "Before the ants and wondering kittens do away with me" Quirky, but in a good way :-D Quirky appeals to me...ah more spiderweb themes! Seems popular for cp poems :D Bonus points for mentioning In My Place, my fave off of AROBTTH :)
I'll try another one on the spot, here goes:

rocking
pendulum
of skin and bone,
the sound of clocks
pulse in the cabinet
that holds the crowd
in place. The springs
are coiled tight
around their hearts
and the sound of its beat
is the soundtrack
of the night

I'll post some other poems later
-Greg

[Naughtyfig]

ahaha..thanks dude...
we'll soon have battle of the coldplay poems...ahaha :roll: :D

[DrPolitik]

Yeah, the more the merrier, there should be a whole forum dedicated to it :D

[Naughtyfig]

Sea of bodies all moving together
Moving with every strum of the guitar
Every beat of the drum
In time with every hum
Surging forward they move
All keeping in the rhymthic groove
Each feeding from each others energy
Drops of sweat, drops of tears squuezed from the words of the songs...all in sincerity..
All on a certain high
Sway as time slowly ticks by
Shaking out their demons they are
Their hearts no longer bound behind that bar
Their mood free and mellow
All enjoying their state of "Yellow"..

:shrug:

[Reilly]

A part of me died today
And although Ive changed
I want to feel the same
About everything

A part of me died today
But would still be alive
If I hadn't realised
Id live life all over again
To feel the same

As the mud washes away
From where I used to play
I feel a void that years have left
Things will never be the same

I looked at that place
And I'd trade now for those days
And I'd do anything else
Just to feel the same

Fond fate I blame.

[Naughtyfig]

uhhh...AWESOME :!:

[Guy'sChick]

I wrote your name in the sky,
but the wind blew it away.
I wrote your name in the sand,
but the waves washed it away.
i wrote your name in my heart,
and forever it will stay!!


bit cheesy i know but oh well

[DrPolitik]

Excellent, good to see such artistry :D Ok this is one of my older ones, exuse the length..I'm fond of it because it's mostly direct and a little quirky/unusual
I call it Minutes From A Curious Allure
Happy reading, enjoy...

I practice my look in the mirror, that long double take
when i’ll catch the pursing of those ruby lips but see
the solvency of your eyes- pockets of teal sunken in the pale-
and wonder if there lies a lonely girl, well heeled, but girlish still.
I imagine you a taut petiole plucked from the pumice of night,
twisting on a parquet floor at a ball, or a coiled honeysuckle
waiting for the season to begin. Though even if it never does
i’ll still willfully submerge myself in the carbon aftertaste
of your rosewater breath should you decide upon a garage entombment,
slumped in that old chrome lined glass casket on wheels clad
with rust and varicolored panels. You see for years i’ve watched,

from a carefully measured distance, you welcome crimson blisters
onto tired feet and splice them on rose thorns while running barefoot
through the gardens, forcing nervous laughter each time pretty girls
you call friends wrap their fingers in barbed wire then pay you
backhanded compliments. Last week’s gauzes still hang from the lines,
soaking in the rain. Fat droplets off the cloths usher you into adulthood,
reddening the grass. Maybe it would be the methyl sting behind my eyes,
your snake-like thighs framed in the leather interior, or a toxic halo
set above you, but something would make me gaze at the limestone
plane of your face and those involute tendrils hung from its rafters
as we arrive late for the wrecking ball so early in the twilight.

[Guy'sChick]

hey thats good!! i would love to read more of your work..i can show u some of mine too! :D

[DrPolitik]

ok more coldplay action...

Sing it out now
Wrap it in strands of candy floss
Feed me, I need a little sugar
I want candy coated pills
Of you to take when I get blue
And when the fever strikes me Yellow

Sing it back now
Drink it in like ruby wine
Seeps into the veins
Washes over the mind
Undulates in waves

[Reilly]

You liked that? I kinda wrote it on the spot, lemme try another...

With a kiss at midnight
We'll slide through the crowd
You'll smile while hiding
I can see you now

Im already awake
I can see youre face
You're trying to hide
Why?

Crying under the covers
I thought that was a smile
I dont need another
But I cant help but think of her

With a kiss at midnight
Started the end
Im looking at you, looking at me
Like our reflection of scum
What else can we be







:( I dont like either.

[Guy'sChick]

*sigh* that was good :)

[DrPolitik]

hey thats good!! i would love to read more of your work..i can show u some of mine too! :D

Thank You :) You can see more at poets-in-tents.com, i post there under the name shoeless joe...or i can just post here as well since there's a few writers about here...sure love to see your work, where at?

-Greg

[Guy'sChick]

ill go check but yeah i guess u can do them here too i dont mind really :)

[DrPolitik]

yeah ok, the poems i've posted here so far are old posts from over there, but theres one or two new ones on there right now...i dont mind just posting here anyways, its more fun here :D Yeah, post here too!

[Guy'sChick]

im off to bed now tho its late! ill post some more of mine tomorrow :D

[DrPolitik]

woah didnt realize how late it was! gotta get to bed
cya later then

[Guy'sChick]

ok well one b4 i go then
i wrote it for my boyfriend

the sparkle in your eye
the warmth of your skin
your breath on my neck
that quivers within

the touch of your hand
the smell of your hair
the kindness of your smile
that strength in your stare

your kiss on my lips
your body near mine
the stroke of your touch
that feeling inside

the sound of your voice
compassion in your embrace
the serenity in your stride
the power in your face

the calming of your presence
the beating of your heart
the promise of tomorrow
that we may never part

the beauty of your kiss
and that magic in your touch
it is for all these reasons and more
why i love you so much

[DrPolitik]

oooh..sweet..i bet he loved it :)

[Hicksy]

ginger thats so lovely :)

he is a very very lucky guy ;) :D

[Naughtyfig]

awesome poem...

[DrPolitik]

ahaha yeeeaaah...lets lighten the mood...

Oh David

(An Ode to Hasselhoff)

Oh David, they say you absconded
from the reprehensible Baywatch,
but we're not here to speak of such horrors...
I felt for you, your artistic torment-
always overshadowed by silicone.

David, Oh David, resplendent in the cathode's glow,
cable is so fickle dear boy, and one day you will surely go.
So if that fateful day does come- the last broadcast
of your cauliflower mullet and leather attire,
my mournful head will droop as I retire...
to my basement for marathon sessions of
taped Knight Rider classics.

Oh David, we'll always have Germany
where record sales still astound;
for tis a curious favorite son they've found.
Alas David, the demon drink may have claimed you now,
though one day they'll make you the patron saint of rehab;
but should you ever fall from grace and need another round
I'll shout out aloud: "Don't you know who he is?!"
and gladly pick up the tab.

[Naughtyfig]

ahahhhhaa...

ahahaha..thats funny..David Hasselhoff

[DrPolitik]

yep good ol' david! Always good for a laugh! :P

[Naughtyfig]

This is one a wrote when I was seven years old...I was trying to tell this kid how much I hated her... :twisted: :shrug:
_______

There a little dicky bird sitting on a tree
Sitting to get a bread crumb from me
I looked at the well
If only my evil it could smell
It would have known what next was coming was pure HELL
I smiled at that stinking little dicky bird
As I pulled out stones soaking in the thick brown mud
I never lost eye contact with the annoying little thing
That bastard took my pet worm for a by-means-of-air little midday fling
I took hold of my weapons and aimed for the sucker
And stoned it til it lost every STINKING feather..

_______
my mother spanked when she read..she said that was VERY bad... :twisted: :D

[Naughtyfig]

I only liked him in Kinight Rider...... :oops: :P

[DrPolitik]

oooh, vicious poem :o :D I wouldn't have wanted to cross you back then!

I loved knight rider as a kid :)

[hollybelle]

Pick me out from beneath the thorns
Please hearing me crying out for your touch
My throat is dry and aching
Hear before I lose my voice
Pick me out from beneath the thorns
Please inhale my beautiful aroma
Let it left all your fears and burdens away
Pick me out from beneath the thorns
Before the rain drowns in its anger
Before the sun buns me up from his lust
Before the ants and wondering kittens do away with me
Pick me out from beneath the thorns
For I have been waiting ah many years for you

I love this Lois, this is exactly what I am feeling right now.... Wow....
I am so not a poet but you my dear definitely are.
As all the rest of you are too. I love reading these... keep them coming... ok!

Holly

[Naughtyfig]

awww...Holly sure..I'll keep em coming. :)

_____-

Well Greg any...7 year old will be pissed after someone trips ém and they end up in mud... :cry: ....in front of the boy they had a crush on... :shrug:

[DrPolitik]

Well Greg any...7 year old will be pissed after someone trips ém and they end up in mud... :cry: ....in front of the boy they had a crush on... :shrug:

Oooh :( for sure, understandable pre-pubescent rage! here's a "crush" poem i wrote:

Susanne, have you ever seen two stars fall
in mirrored arches?--Lambent flares gliding
through a failing light, only to wane
then vanish. In you I saw a celestial form
draped in floral dresses, old cardigans
and army boots. In those eyes I saw Jupiter
afloat on an ivory sea. I hung
on your words like a damp checkered shirt
flailing on a winter line, waited
for you to take me in to dry. Susanne,
you and I will look up one night and see
the two of us sifted from stardust.

[hollybelle]

oh how sweet! "crushes" oh how i would like to have a crush on someone right now!!
out with the old love and in with the new love(s) - a girl can dream!! ;)

[Naughtyfig]

ahahaha..yeah Holly...aahahaa

that was nice Greg...
I dont think I have any serious crush poems...
I write lil dorky ones to ppl laugh..
_______

Dont pretend that you dont know that I like you
You know you see following you around the halls
You its me making those ridiculous phonecalls
You know I'm the girl that sits behind you in class
Day dreaming about the two of us rolling around in the grass
You know I'm always willing to do your home work
Even though you probably think that I'm the biggest dork
You know I like you cause I can never look at your eyes
And when I see you..there flopping around in my stomach are butterflies
Yeah I'm just that regular girl
But I know that in bed I can make you howl..

bwahahahahaha... :D

[hollybelle]

you go girl!!!! ;)

[Naughtyfig]

:) :lol:

[LiquidSky]

I feel that I should post a poem also, but I'm to lazi to go get the diary right now.... I'll post one later on... somehow I keep saying that, I'll post one later on, lol

[Naughtyfig]

I gonna come beat u up if u dont post soon! :twisted:

[LiquidSky]

:D :D :D :D
hey go easy on me! I'm having a hard time right now, & you want to beat me up? I just lost a friend yesterday & I went to his funeral today, it was heartbreaking :(

[Naughtyfig]

aight u're excused.... :D

[LiquidSky]

Thank you><
You can beat me up later on, let's say in a month?

[Hicksy]

awww hope you are ok :sad:

sends happy thoughts :)

[de_rhcp]

Close my eyes, and try to remember
when everything started
A million years ago, so long,
so soon it was all over
I can feel your hand all over me, so warm,
and your smell is everywhere
Your voice, your laugh,
just like echoes that never stop
When the wind meets my face
I realize that there’s no going back
The echoes stop and my breath is all I hear
I look down and is your face that I see
My body is empty, and my mind aches
I let my self fall, just to touch your face
So cold, so nice
I am coming to you, on the other side

is not that good since english is not my first language, i rather write in portuguese ;)

[Naughtyfig]

oh okay..in amonth you're on..

*goings into heavy combat training* :twisted:

[de_rhcp]

sorry, but i didn't understand :-o

[Naughtyfig]

ohh I didnt mean that for u ..I'm sorry :oops: ...
but nice poem..post some more :)

[de_rhcp]

ok :D
sorry then...

[Naughtyfig]

from ur screen name I take it u like the red hot chili peppers/

I like 'em too.. :)

[TriflesAndEvils]

Smiling in your chest it finds me,
Its keeping all your thoughts from me ,
And as it swells in two different bodies ,
I hope not to disrupt the ground which it shaking ,
The ground is broken ,
Im hoping i will always find you in one place ,
This will be our fantasy ,
Cus it's the dream world that exists inside of we ,
Short and tough my tongue it finds the secrets you could share ,
Your fears were taken from the air,
And you held me in a pool of my own pain,
Taking it though my mouth was closed ,
And it filled in through my veins ,
Now in the back of my brains it hurts ,
Oh how marvelous a sound it makes ,
Losing my sight and my hands shoot out to find ,
What can pierce through skin,
For hearts are all but dead ,
But mine is bleeding through,
My fists are full ,
Babies are crying but none are dying ,
My mood cant last , for it is slowing fading already ,
None makes sense to me ,
How could one understand ,
My thoughts are all bland ,
None is exciting ,
All are continued ,
Streaming in one big line ,
In One big line they cut me ,
My thoughts are all bland,
The tap is all done ,
Many headaches form one ,
If i think about the singing ,
The words wont come out ,
My thoughts are all clashing ,
The intelligent can find the meaning ,
The warm has left this space ,
Outside it runs into my face ,
Killing my beauty stealing it from
A wonderful being inside all of our Nights IT Finds ,
It finds none other then he ,
Surprising all who loved him ,
Terrifying all those for the minutes past the less they live ,
Stolen minutes we fear
None makes sense to me ,
How could one understand ,
My thoughts are all bland ,
None is understanding humanity ,
All are continued ,
Streaming in one big line ,
In One big line they slit my wrist ,
My thoughts bleed out through my fist

[Oh HoNEy]

WOW thats beautiful and very meaningful....:oops: its so sweeet! :D

[hollybelle]

ok Lois i have one.... to share...

He came by tonight
just passing by
can't you shed some light
on the future of us?
there was so much I wanted to ask
but I didn't I let it
all pass...
Someday I will find
the nerve, the courage
to ask how you feel
but not right now....
You still need to heal.
:?

[Naughtyfig]

short and sweet..lovely post some more..

[Naughtyfig]

this is what happens u're seriously pmsing and the best guy wo've met so far inur enitre life says ,"umm..look..hmm.I think we seriously need some ....umm..space"
\/
Ah!!!!!! up for another bloody day in hell. What could be more beautiful! This is what I get for actually ending my nine-hour period of mental freedom. Ah how refreshing it would be to just stay in there and reminisce.
Getting up to face those demons every day is my battlefield. I’ve been faithfully fighting the war for last twenty years. Victory I can not say is sweet for I have never tasted it. Defeat I know leads one into a dark, cold, lonely place. That’s where I view the world.
I have never been on the other side. You know… that place that’s supposedly good and liberating. Some people always say that life is a play written by you and the world’s your stage… act it out well… bullshit… sure every one has a plan they want to follow, but chance and fate and luck and that Supreme Being steps in and edits it for you. The world is not a stage. The world is apart of that play… just another character like yourself.
Before I leave my decrepit palace, I put my mask on. Don’t want to look too vulnerable. For there are also vicious predators lurking behind the many masks I see… waiting to get me. The demons I face have to face me as well… nonsense it is.
We all look for some affliction to blame for every mistake we make or every broken promise or every bit of disappointment that comes our way. Pointing fingers I am for there is always one pointing back at me. We can’t get any from each other or ourselves no matter how hard we try. Life just doesn’t work that way. But we all wear the masks and pretend we know it.
I stand and walk and sit among monsters, gods, angels, all demons, every day. They are my enemies; members of the battlefield; all sooner or later casualties of the war. The demons I have to live with. No, that’s incorrect. The demons I choose to live it.
Perfection is not really a happy place. That is why we cry trouble. That is why we cry wolf, wolf. That is why we taunt death. Plague the Devil and bore God.
Love is the biggest disease that one could ever suffer from. Nothing wrenches out the heart more; or looses a soul; or confuses the mind; or frustrates ones body like love. It drives one to the very edges of fucking insanity. What is it really? No one knows. No one has the slightest clue. No one can begin to imagine what love is. I’ve tried. A waste of breath, time, energy... all for a temporary tsunami of pleasure.
But really things aren’t as bad as we always make it seem. There are bursts of satisfying joy, tranquility… all the goodness that we always wish for. But keep in mind only bursts. Not decades; not eons; not days; only bursts. Little precious spaces in time… when everything stops and God kisses you on the lips… angels swam around you… life is good then. Then and only then hopes seems present; possibility seems real. Then and only then we do not fight that war. Then and only then the battlefield muted, paused.
Trying to hard to impress is what wears us out. Age is not only a number. It is how long we have been soldiers. Soldiers in our armies. It is how long we have been wishing for it to end. It is how long we have been wearily trying too hard. It is how long we have occupied useless space.
Death is a frequent light bulb we turn on in our minds. It’s our only reoccurring dream. Our executions of it are constant failures. For death is too swift, too cunning. A battle falling along the lines of the Tortoise and the Hare. We always like to think that we can time it. But we know we can’t. It sneaks up on you and sucks you up in its unforgiving vortex.
Some of us are soo ready to die…but have not yet answered the question…”what’s after this?” I have an idea of what happens after my life..but I’m not ready for it.. for it is not my desired painting. But I can’t control it…it is not my duty. We cannot control the world as much as we would think we could.
This is my rant…this is about the end of my short story…a story not well written...not well-spoken…don’t analyze or critique…for this is just a very long thought.

[LiquidSky]

awww hope you are ok :sad:

sends happy thoughts :)

thanks :)

[LiquidSky]

oh okay..in amonth you're on..

*goings into heavy combat training* :twisted:

Oh, gosh! you wanna beat me up that bad?

[Naughtyfig]

nahhh :lol:

[LiquidSky]

sorry, but i didn't understand :-o'

hehehehhehe

[Everlong]

:o You guys are good poets. I'm okay, meself, but here's one of mine:

Corruption

What is beauty?
Is it the bile of a woman
Whose ribs potrude so proudly?
Is it the graceful walk
Of a woman with no thoughts?
Or is it a vibrant red rose,
With a stem of angry thorns?

What is righteousness?
Is it giving to a worthy cause,
Without even caring?
Is it concealing crimes and lies,
For the sake of the not so innocent?
Or is it painting the ideal
Of love and peace
Between the ones we truely hate?

What is evilry?
Is it the battle
Of a broken man screaming to be acknowledged?
Is it the secrets
That we should have been told?
Or is it the person
Who is not afriad to speak against
What is held as the supposed truth?

So teach me the lies,
Make me a member of society.
Corrupt me into believing
An illusion of the truth,
So that I can be another statistic.
I'm sick of searching for the answers.

Mold me with your countless hands,
Like clay of and obscene statue.
I've given up on being heard.

[Naughtyfig]

nice..I loved that first verse... :-D

[Hicksy]

"I've given up on being heard"

that a very sad but very relevant statement

very impressive :)

[Hicksy]

was that a stream of conciousness Naughtyfig?

interesting but intense! :shock:

[DrPolitik]

:o You guys are good poets. I'm okay, meself, but here's one of mine:

Corruption

What is beauty?
Is it the bile of a woman
Whose ribs potrude so proudly?
Is it the graceful walk
Of a woman with no thoughts?
Or is it a vibrant red rose,
With a stem of angry thorns?

What is righteousness?
Is it giving to a worthy cause,
Without even caring?
Is it concealing crimes and lies,
For the sake of the not so innocent?
Or is it painting the ideal
Of love and peace
Between the ones we truely hate?

What is evilry?
Is it the battle
Of a broken man screaming to be acknowledged?
Is it the secrets
That we should have been told?
Or is it the person
Who is not afriad to speak against
What is held as the supposed truth?

So teach me the lies,
Make me a member of society.
Corrupt me into believing
An illusion of the truth,
So that I can be another statistic.
I'm sick of searching for the answers.

Mold me with your countless hands,
Like clay of and obscene statue.
I've given up on being heard.

wow that's very very good...when i was 14 i probably didnt even know what poetry was! I didnt even start writing poetry till i was 19 :) The last 3 lines are especially good..yeah know that feeling :(

[DrPolitik]

this is one of my early ones:

What is there left to say?
An open mouth forms icicles,
words crippled and paralyzed,
crushed by the weight of a drama
in my mind.
Tidal waves shatter in silence,
blood and ice spray the empty canvas
of my thoughts,
like a genius in a frenzy
like a dishonered master
in search of retribution,
seeking solution
though the problem is misidentified.

What is there left to say?
today ends like tommorrow,
on a calender page,
in a fit of rage,
like a red curtain on a stage.

What is there left to say?
is something owed?
Something stolen once borrowed?
Without identification
it's never put back
inside me where it belongs,
intact or broken.
So when today meets tommorrow,
no words are spoken.

[Hicksy]

i like that too!

you should make a poetry mini-site

poems of that quality deserve to be out there in some form! :)

[DrPolitik]

perhaps everyone here who writes should join forces and share a site or something..tho i don't have a clue about building the things :-o

[Naughtyfig]

was that a stream of conciousness Naughtyfig?

interesting but intense! :shock:

I indirectly dumped.. and PMS ing when I wrote that...though time..

[Naughtyfig]

a mini site..I have a site and forget to update all the time..I ws thinking about getting some stuff published but I'm a bum whe it comes to compiling things..
__
Greg I went to that web site..ur poems are good...its a cool site

[DrPolitik]

a mini site..I have a site and forget to update all the time..I ws thinking about getting some stuff published but I'm a bum whe it comes to compiling things..
__
Greg I went to that web site..ur poems are good...its a cool site

yeah publishing...me a lazy bum too! I've never tried to get any of my stuff published, will try one day :roll: I did have one published recently tho, the editor approached me at that site (he posts there too under the name Hopper) heres a link if you'd like to check it out: http://www.whistlingshade.com/0203/cadiz.html

yeah it's a good little site, some good writers there :)

[Naughtyfig]

I'll site that out after I roll over and die in english class today

[LiquidSky]

Looks like you like every single song, Naughthy

[Naughtyfig]

Why'd u say that?

[Dania]

poetry shmoetry

ok

I know that in ur eyes Iam nothing but go ask those who can't have me.

[Naughtyfig]

:-D ..
Dania Dania Dania.....

[Naughtyfig]

What the winds bring they bring

My heart is still hard, cold, frozen

I tumble and fall

People rush by me

Stampeding

Trampling

Kicking

Laughing

Cursing

Spitting

Crying

I lie there

It seems fitting for the momment

The sky a pretty grey

Rain falls

Freezing as it hits

With every blink of my eyes

Life seems to get taken down a notch

A child stops over me and lets a pink rose glide out of her tiny, beautiful hands

Smiles as the rose gently rests on my breasts

Her mother concerned about the looks of the others pulls the child along

My blinking is longer

Life gets slower

Slower almost stopping

I feel my hair fall nicely along my face and the raindrops pet it with sincere pity

The clouds part for just amoment

My eyes close

Never to open again

[DrPolitik]

:( hope the wind doesnt stay too long :)

[de_rhcp]

i know you guys don't understand portuguese but...

Mais uma noite chega e eu me sinto inconsolavel, com tudo ao meu redor, o que antes se escondia na luz do luar se revela, incansavel e insasiavel. Vou andando sem direção certa, apenas sigo, com a certeza de que não quero te encontrar. Não quero ter que olhar nos seus olhos e ver sua tristeza, sua decpção e sua dor por mim, não quero ter que sentir o peso da culpa mais uma vez recaindo sobre mim, não quero... Mas te ver, sentir o seu cheiro, escutar sua voz, parece inevitavel e meu corpo me renuncia chamando por ti. Então ouço sua voz dizendo oi, e chego a acreditar que é coisa da minha mente, mas me viro e sua figura enche meus olhos e perco os sentidos me engasgando ao responder. É então que percebo que teu corpo também te renuncia e é por isso que vens atras de mim, apesar te toda a dor que causei ainda anseia pelo meu toque, pelo meu amor. Falo com você e me sinto despedaçar quando não consegue olhar para mim, não consegue me encarar, e sinto o mundo caindo sobre minhas costas. O arrependimento e a culpa são meus demonios, e me perseguem, me matam aos poucos, e de repente paro de falar, não consigo mais, e as lágrimas rolam pelo meu rosto, e você, você apenas segura minha mão e continuamos caminhando.

i will try to translate this when i have some time, but i don't know if it'll be good, anyway i love here, i love reading all this poems ;) . very nice

and i do like red hot chili peppers...

[Naughtyfig]

yeah do get the translation...Im sure its nice stuff

do u like their new album?

[LiquidSky]

Ok, this is something that an admirer gaved to me
And don't laugh! It goes something like this...

I don't know who you are, or what's your name;
don't know if you are a good, humanitarian, & a goddess, or if you are like the rest of them, like lots of them, insensitive and false.
I'm starting to know you by the veils of my fantasies and my hopes.
I ignore your life, your past glories, and the ilusions that for tomorrow will baste your mind. And even your glanze is still unknown because I haven't gotten the haphazard to look at your face close. I know I can love you, because I'm longing for you & to be with you whenever you desire & for your history, be everything or nothing at all! Nevertheless, I ignore who you are, how you are, and what's your name.

The end, don't laugh! I actually thought it was very cute, I'm kinda embarrased to show it to y'all I don't even know why, I guess because it's personal? :D :D

[Oh HoNEy]

:o wow these poems/songs are immesly intelligent and brilliant!...you people should publish your poems!! :D ...wonderful!!!

[Naughtyfig]

awwww how cute.... :D
___________

Come take a train ride with me
Lets take a ride to the other side
There’s nothing left for us over here
Lets not miss our train my sweet dear
Now
Cover your ears
As we pass through our forests of green and yellow
For they will try to whisper sweet sayings to draw you near
Look at the pretty fairies and pixies play beneath our waterfalls
See that’s beauty’s eyes
Look over there in the valleys down below
Look at us run after the butterflies
See our tea party
Hear the violin in the background
Listen to the piano
Hear it just take it away
Liked my pretty dress?
With pretty pink lace
Soft white silk
Enjoyed the layers beneath?
Look at you
You all decked off in vest, tie, fancy trousers, jacket and your signature messenger cap
You always charmed me
Up ahead see the snow
The days of gallivanting with ice freezing on our noses
Look at our frozen garden of roses
They could never stop us
No matter how hard they fell
Isn’t it pretty?
Ouu the stars are out
We’re on that little hill over there
Look at you making sweet little wishes for me
See how big we’ve grown
Awww
Look at how pretty your daises look in my hair
See how charming you look in moonlight
You always took my breath away
Remember how fingers felt through your hair
My breathe on your cheeks
My waist around your arms
I remember how your lips felt against mine
Your hands on my thighs
Good times weren’t they?
Next stop fire and brim stone
See that’s why we’re leaving
See what happens when hearts break
When souls lose each other
Feel the heat
Smell the smoke
Look what you did to me over there
Hear your angry demons lashing out at me?
Look at on kneeling on your hot coals
Your hell’s fire
Hear my tears scream as they drip through the flames
That’s why we’re leaving
We’ve stopped there
The story shouldn’t continue there
Don’t you think?
Sit back with me
Puts your arms around me
Lets close our eyes
Lets listen to the violin and piano rage war in our heads
Lets your love drown me
Just enjoy this train ride with me

[LiquidSky]

I haven't really read all the poems yet I will sometime soon

[Oh HoNEy]

awwww how cute.... :D
___________

Come take a train ride with me
Lets take a ride to the other side
There’s nothing left for us over here
Lets not miss our train my sweet dear
Now
Cover your ears
As we pass through our forests of green and yellow
For they will try to whisper sweet sayings to draw you near
Look at the pretty fairies and pixies play beneath our waterfalls
See that’s beauty’s eyes
Look over there in the valleys down below
Look at us run after the butterflies
See our tea party
Hear the violin in the background
Listen to the piano
Hear it just take it away
Liked my pretty dress?
With pretty pink lace
Soft white silk
Enjoyed the layers beneath?
Look at you
You all decked off in vest, tie, fancy trousers, jacket and your signature messenger cap
You always charmed me
Up ahead see the snow
The days of gallivanting with ice freezing on our noses
Look at our frozen garden of roses
They could never stop us
No matter how hard they fell
Isn’t it pretty?
Ouu the stars are out
We’re on that little hill over there
Look at you making sweet little wishes for me
See how big we’ve grown
Awww
Look at how pretty your daises look in my hair
See how charming you look in moonlight
You always took my breath away
Remember how fingers felt through your hair
My breathe on your cheeks
My waist around your arms
I remember how your lips felt against mine
Your hands on my thighs
Good times weren’t they?
Next stop fire and brim stone
See that’s why we’re leaving
See what happens when hearts break
When souls lose each other
Feel the heat
Smell the smoke
Look what you did to me over there
Hear your angry demons lashing out at me?
Look at on kneeling on your hot coals
Your hell’s fire
Hear my tears scream as they drip through the flames
That’s why we’re leaving
We’ve stopped there
The story shouldn’t continue there
Don’t you think?
Sit back with me
Puts your arms around me
Lets close our eyes
Lets listen to the violin and piano rage war in our heads
Lets your love drown me
Just enjoy this train ride with me


DID YOU WRITE THAT?? :o

[Naughtyfig]

yeah I did...

[Oh HoNEy]

jesus christ *sorry god* ....THATS AMAZING...YOU ARE TALENTED!

[Naughtyfig]

aww..thanks.... :oops: :P ....

[Oh HoNEy]

your welcom :D

[Naughtyfig]

I'll post some more 2morrow

[Oh HoNEy]

alright :D

[de_rhcp]

Naughtyfig, this last one is really good! So sweet, somehow... :-D

about their last album, great!! About what I wrote, i'll try my best to trasnlate...

[Naughtyfig]

yeah I liked the last album too..esp the song BY THE WAY..awesome!
and I'll be patiently waiting for the translation
_______

Go ahead, pour your tea and butter your biscuits
Ignore my cries
Dont answer my questions
Add more sugar and darken your toast
Dont see me waving infront of you
Watch me fall and get bruised by the wind
Go ahead, turn up Sir Elton John and the Beatles
Dont hear me screaming
Pretend not to see pain dig fingers into my back and ripping my heart out
Please do, pick up the Sunday paper and laugh at the entertainment and gossip columns
Forget I am trying to get your attention
Look in the other direction so disappointment can torture me
Go ahead, finish sipping your tea with your little finger out in the air
Í wont go anywhere
I'm still on your tight leash
And I know that you know I'm there
No matter how hard I try
You send death away
Go ahead sip your tea and butter your toast and biscuits
I hope death comes for you instead

[Dania]

I'll post some more 2morrow

HURRY UP!!

[hollybelle]

Lois, I so love your poems!!! You my dear are an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing them. I pale in your poetic light!

Holly ;)

[Dania]

yeah I liked the last album too..esp the song BY THE WAY..awesome!
and I'll be patiently waiting for the translation
_______

Go ahead, pour your tea and butter your biscuits
Ignore my cries
Dont answer my questions
Add more sugar and darken your toast
Dont see me waving infront of you
Watch me fall and get bruised by the wind
Go ahead, turn up Sir Elton John and the Beatles
Dont hear me screaming
Pretend not to see pain dig fingers into my back and ripping my heart out
Please do, pick up the Sunday paper and laugh at the entertainment and gossip columns
Forget I am trying to get your attention
Look the other direction so disappointment can torture me
Go ahead, finish sipping your tea with your little finger out in the air
Í wont go anywhere
I still on your tight leash
And I know you that you know I''m there
No matter how hard I try
You send death away
Go ahead sip your tea and butter your toast and biscuits
I hope death comes for you instead


very nice!

[Naughtyfig]

Thank u alll.... :)

my mother just walked by and said I should stop ego tripppin :lol: ...
funny ole lady....
_______

[Naughtyfig]

Kiss me at night when we’re all alone
Kiss me then and tell me that you love me
Kiss my tears when I’m crying
Kiss me then and tell me that you care
Kiss my forehead when I’m angry
Kiss me then and tell me it’s okay
Kiss my fingers when I’m bored
Kiss me then and tell me you have a surprise for me
Kiss my feet when I’m tired
Kiss me then and tell me I’m beautiful
Kiss me every morning when we get up
Kiss me then and tell that you love me
Kiss my lips when I’m yelling
Kiss me then and tell me you’re sorry
Kiss me because you’ll love me always

[hollybelle]

ok, here's a big smooch for you!!!! he he ;)

Holly

[Dania]

thanks for that lois tell ur mum one day she's gonna have a famous poet for a daughter

[Oh HoNEy]

:D aww thats sweet! :)

[Naughtyfig]

awww...smooch to u to holly... I'll tell her Dania

[Dania]

lol how are ya?

[Naughtyfig]

good...feeling evil :twisted:

[LiquidSky]

Lois the poet!
Write me something? :D :D :D

[Naughtyfig]

okay.. Here's to Josline (prolly spelled it wrond eh?)

She sits down faithfully everyday
Infront of her big old computer screen to post her life away
She brings smiles to her fellow messageboarders
Even though they're all really strangers
Liquidsky or Crazybabe
The change of names doesn't matter
She's still the same sweet, funny coldplay lover
She'll peek in and tweek a thread
Or post something witty and then run off to bed
But no matter what she does
She's cool, she's nice she'sones of us...she's truly ours... :shrug:

[LiquidSky]

okay.. Here's to Josline (prolly spelled it wrond eh?)

She sits down faithfully everyday
Infront of her big old computer screen to post her life away
She brings smiles to her fellow messageboarders
Even though they're all really strangers
Liquidsky or Crazybabe
The change of names doesn't matter
She's still the same sweet, funny coldplay lover
She'll peek in and tweek a thread
Or post something witty and then run off to bed
But no matter what she does
She's cool, she's nice she'sones of us...she's truly ours... :shrug:

yeah, you did misspelled my name is JOSCELINE*
NICE! I LOVE IT! But I don't have an old computer.... it burned, so I got a new one! :D :D aww, do I really bring smiles to other mbs? I don't think that's true, but if it does, awww, how cute :D

[LiquidSky]

okay.. Here's to Josline (prolly spelled it wrond eh?)

She sits down faithfully everyday
Infront of her big old computer screen to post her life away
She brings smiles to her fellow messageboarders
Even though they're all really strangers
Liquidsky or Crazybabe
The change of names doesn't matter
She's still the same sweet, funny coldplay lover
She'll peek in and tweek a thread
Or post something witty and then run off to bed
But no matter what she does
She's cool, she's nice she'sones of us...she's truly ours... :shrug:

yeah, you did misspelled my name is JOSCELINE*
NICE! I LOVE IT! But I don't have an old computer.... it burned, so I got a new one! :D :D aww, do I really bring smiles to other mbs? I don't think that's true, but if it does, awww, how cute :D

[LiquidSky]

okay.. Here's to Josline (prolly spelled it wrond eh?)

She sits down faithfully everyday
Infront of her big old computer screen to post her life away
She brings smiles to her fellow messageboarders
Even though they're all really strangers
Liquidsky or Crazybabe
The change of names doesn't matter
She's still the same sweet, funny coldplay lover
She'll peek in and tweek a thread
Or post something witty and then run off to bed
But no matter what she does
She's cool, she's nice she'sones of us...she's truly ours... :shrug:

yeah, you did misspelled my name is JOSCELINE*
NICE! I LOVE IT! But I don't have an old computer.... it burned, so I got a new one! :D :D aww, do I really bring smiles to other mbs? I don't think that's true, but if it does, awww, how cute :D

[LiquidSky]

okay.. Here's to Josline (prolly spelled it wrond eh?)

She sits down faithfully everyday
Infront of her big old computer screen to post her life away
She brings smiles to her fellow messageboarders
Even though they're all really strangers
Liquidsky or Crazybabe
The change of names doesn't matter
She's still the same sweet, funny coldplay lover
She'll peek in and tweek a thread
Or post something witty and then run off to bed
But no matter what she does
She's cool, she's nice she'sones of us...she's truly ours... :shrug:

yeah, you did misspelled my name is JOSCELINE*
NICE! I LOVE IT! But I don't have an old computer.... it burned, so I got a new one! :D :D aww, do I really bring smiles to other mbs? I don't think that's true, but if it does, awww, how cute :D

[LiquidSky]

okay.. Here's to Josline (prolly spelled it wrond eh?)

She sits down faithfully everyday
Infront of her big old computer screen to post her life away
She brings smiles to her fellow messageboarders
Even though they're all really strangers
Liquidsky or Crazybabe
The change of names doesn't matter
She's still the same sweet, funny coldplay lover
She'll peek in and tweek a thread
Or post something witty and then run off to bed
But no matter what she does
She's cool, she's nice she'sones of us...she's truly ours... :shrug:

yeah, you did misspelled my name is JOSCELINE*
NICE! I LOVE IT! But I don't have an old computer.... it burned, so I got a new one! :D :D aww, do I really bring smiles to other mbs? I don't think that's true, but if it does, awww, how cute :D

[LiquidSky]

sorry for the 5 replys, the mb wasn't working right for me, sorry....

[Naughtyfig]

Well Josceline... I see you really liked the poem..since u reply 5XS.... :D


ahahahah..

[Kettercat]

Okay, I'm a bit late round here, just thought I'd give a little plug to my own site where you can find many poems I've written... but they're all crap :roll: So I wouldn't recommend reading them really, unless you're really, really bored.

http://5iveweb.com/sullen

[Naughtyfig]

hey Kettercat...nice poems..

[Kettercat]

Thanks :D

Also, thanks for signing my guestbook :) Actually I'm at your website right now.

[de_rhcp]

i wanna a new life
with a new me, inside
of what i am

a new life inside this life,
with nothing to remind me
of how it is

don't wanna look around
to see you everywhere round
don't wanna wake up without
you in my heart
don't wanna my heart

i can't let you go, because
i would go right after you
i wanna a new life, somehow
the same life, with a different
you, and a different me
and everyone else
where are everyone that i love?
long gone inside my life,
my old life, so old that i miss
and i miss you so

don't wanna look around
to see you every where round
don't wanna wake up without
you in my heart
DON'T WANNA MY LIFE

mean it :|

[Naughtyfig]

u mean it...sounds sad... :sad:

[Dania]

oye u madam Lois u better write a poem about me NOW Iam the one that has to put up with u day in and out :D and it better not be rude :-D

[Naughtyfig]

I going to write u one today...dont worry ;)

[Dania]

:D

[hollybelle]

I can so relate with you. Hang in there that's what I do!

Holly

i wanna a new life
with a new me, inside
of what i am

a new life inside this life,
with nothing to remind me
of how it is

don't wanna look around
to see you everywhere round
don't wanna wake up without
you in my heart
don't wanna my heart

i can't let you go, because
i would go right after you
i wanna a new life, somehow
the same life, with a different
you, and a different me
and everyone else
where are everyone that i love?
long gone inside my life,
my old life, so old that i miss
and i miss you so

don't wanna look around
to see you every where round
don't wanna wake up without
you in my heart
DON'T WANNA MY LIFE

mean it :|

[Naughtyfig]

To Dania :D :

Oh chip shop girl
Oh little chip shop girl
Oh little girl how are you today?
Have you removed your head piece to let your hair and wind play?
Have you made it to the chip shop yet?
Have you gotten your regular booth in the corner to observe the young lads coming in and the old, cobwebby ladies with their pointed noses in the air while tugging in their pets?
Are you nibbling on your breaded fish sticks while dipping your chips in ketchup?
Are you chugging down your water in your fancy pancy plastic cup?
Are you pretending not to see that green-eyed cutie up at the bar looking back at you?
Are you afraid that your cheeks will turn into blossoming cherries or instead fear stepping in turning them into lillies and your lips blue?
Why are you feeling hot and flustered as Mr. Green Eyes approaches?
Are you thinking about future walks on the beach and late midnight smooches?
Why are you starting to stuff your things in your bag as he draws near?
Are you worried that he would easily woo you and whisper sweet sayings in your ear?
Why did your heart skip a beat when he stopped in front of you?
Why did your voice cling to the tip of yourt tongue when he asked, 'How do you do?"
Why is there sweat congregating at the outline of your upper lip?
Is it because as he sat down to join you..his hand brushed by your hip?
Why is there a smile chisled across your face and you walking in a daze?
Is it because of the warmth of that kiss he graced your cheeks with that will linger there for days?
Are you now fulfilled and ridiculously happy..oh little chip shop girl?

[shangrila]

I thought I had something to write, but I blanked, sorry. Instead I got an idea, how about we all write a poem together. I write a line and them someone else continues. I could make it a new thread or just start it here. What do you guys think?

[Dania]

To Dania :D :

Oh chip shop girl
Oh little chip shop girl
Oh little girl how are you today?
Have you removed your head piece to let your hair and wind play?
Have you made it to the chip shop yet?
Have you gotten your regular booth in the corner to observe the young lads coming in and the old, cobwebby ladies with their pointed noses in the air while tugging in their pets?
Are you nibbling on your breaded fish sticks while dipping your chips in ketchup?
Are you chugging down your water in your fancy pancy plastic cup?
Are you pretending not to see that green-eyed cutie up at the bar looking back at you?
Are you afraid that your cheeks will turn into blossoming cherries or instead fear stepping in turning them into lillies and your lips blue?
Why are you feeling hot and flustered as Mr. Green Eyes approaches?
Are you thinking about future walks on the beach and late midnight smooches?
Why are you starting to stuff your things in your bag as he draws near?
Are you worried that he would easily woo you and whisper sweet sayings in your ear?
Why did your heart skip a beat when he stopped in front of you?
Why did your voice cling to the tip of yourt tongue when he asked, 'How do you do?"
Why is there sweat congregating at the outline of your upper lip?
Is it because as he sat down to join you..his hand brushed by your hip?
Why is there a smile chisled across your face and you walking in a daze?
Is it because of the warmth of that kiss he graced your cheeks with that will linger there for days?
Are you now fulfilled and ridiculously happy..oh little chip shop girl?


thank u so much u made my week ( faints)

[Naughtyfig]

ahahaha...whatever Dans...glad u like dit..
________

writting a poem together def. sounds good..have a theme in mind?

[walkingcontradiction]

:o the poems are fantastic..!! damn why wasnt i here earlier? keep em coming pls.. i love reading all of em. :D

[Naughtyfig]

Old lady sits in tree
Never comes down..just stares wildly at me
Every morning one my way to school
I feel sorry for sitting up there in her dress of wool
The birds flock all over her
Ignoring her presence hour by hour
Churping, nesting , they move about
I can tell she wants to join in but she is w/ out beak..she has mouth
I beg my daddy to take her down
But acts like I'm asking for pound and crown
I fear for her health now that winter draws near
I want to find warms things for her to wear
My heart aches for that woman w/out name
No one else cares but me and its such a shame..such a shame
I dont think I can sleep through one more night if I still see her perched on that branch in front my bedroom window
Her weary eyes...dying heart..just brings tears to my pillow....

[Naughtyfig]

*bump*

[Manders]

roses are red violets are blue ketchup is red and i like you :)

[Naughtyfig]

ahahahahahaaa....good one..I say it deserves a prize!

:D ;) :D :D

[Manders]

why thank you....many hours of thinking on that one

[Naughtyfig]

bwahahahaha....ok... :D

_______________

I was walking by a river
And I fell in
I came up for air and there you were looking down
But Damn!
When I saw you ..I'd prefer to drown....
---
Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birthday to you
Now eat your cake and kindly go back to the zoo
---
Oh my darling ..love divine..
Oh how your face..resembles a cow's behind
---
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I went to the zoo and I saw a monkey that looked just like you
---

( I remembered that from when I was three ahahah)

[Dania]

LOL those are wellll funny :D

[Manders]

the sky is blue the grass is green im off to church....i need some sleep!

[Naughtyfig]

look in ur mirror and who will u see
king kong and godzilla's bastard child..oh wait that's you..hehe :!:

[Manders]

poop smells and i have no mail but dont you cry for me because i have to pee :-D

[Naughtyfig]

ahahahahaha...oh my

*bump*

[Manders]

When darnkess falls its dark that movie really sucked arse... :D

[Naughtyfig]

yeahh I didnt like that movies....I preferred the Ring... :shrug:

[Manders]

me 2 :)

[Naughtyfig]

yeah the ring was worth the scare... :shrug:
___________

Little Indian boy in white linen outfit sitting intently by the charging river
Oh just, there, strumming away on his guitar
Plucking the strings
Plucking his inner most feelings
The wind blows over
A girl passes by with a clover
He smiles at her
But with a flip of hair she walks away even faster
His heart sighs
But his mind isn’t troubled even though his reflection cries out “Why?”
He strums away
… Away into sunset
… Away into starry moonlight
For he is at peace with his guitar
Alone and happy by the charging river…

[Oh HoNEy]

IT WAS :o

FOOKING CREEPY!!

[Dania]

Those with kind hearts have helping hands - Rumi

[Naughtyfig]

*Bump*

[Manders]

My dad yelled at me for whats in my journal but he doesnt understand that im not so normal He said i cuss too much for my own good But i was just expressing my emotions I hope he understood.....my poem :D

[Everlong]

Now, I warn you, this next poem is crap. Pure crap. Gahhh. Here it is, anyway:

I have finally reached
The shores of bliss
I have thrown away all of my possessions
Casted away my material worries
To run away with you to utopia

It's time for me
To set free what has been haunting me forever
There's no one to tell us we can't
There's no sign that says stop

I'm ready to let go
And run swiftly, barefoot
Through the fields of dewy grass
I'm ready to chase the song of the meadowlark
And count the stars in the sky above me

I've waited long and patiently
For the moment when I could stop my yearnings
For a life with only you and I and the world ahead of us
Where our only worry would be the past
You have recaptured my soul
And now I'm ready to express
All the things you knew all along

I've seen my dreams in your eyes
And my passion in your words
I rushed headlong into your seas
Full of rough waves
That I couldn't swim against
Yet you showed me your sparkling depths
And guided me with your currents
To understanding and fulfillment

You're the one that saved me
From my slow suffocation
And you'll never know
How I reached my paradise
By your hope

[Manders]

oww thats good....u write that?

[Oh HoNEy]

must have, its nice :)

[Everlong]

oww thats good....u write that?

Yep.

[Oh HoNEy]

youre REALLY talented!! :o

[Naughtyfig]

woohooo...the poems are coming back..I like it everlong..post some more..

[hollybelle]

This is not crap! This is really good. Wow very impressed!

Holly ;)

Now, I warn you, this next poem is crap. Pure crap. Gahhh. Here it is, anyway:

I have finally reached
The shores of bliss
I have thrown away all of my possessions
Casted away my material worries
To run away with you to utopia

It's time for me
To set free what has been haunting me forever
There's no one to tell us we can't
There's no sign that says stop

I'm ready to let go
And run swiftly, barefoot
Through the fields of dewy grass
I'm ready to chase the song of the meadowlark
And count the stars in the sky above me

I've waited long and patiently
For the moment when I could stop my yearnings
For a life with only you and I and the world ahead of us
Where our only worry would be the past
You have recaptured my soul
And now I'm ready to express
All the things you knew all along

I've seen my dreams in your eyes
And my passion in your words
I rushed headlong into your seas
Full of rough waves
That I couldn't swim against
Yet you showed me your sparkling depths
And guided me with your currents
To understanding and fulfillment

You're the one that saved me
From my slow suffocation
And you'll never know
How I reached my paradise
By your hope

[hollybelle]

ok here's another one

LLCC

lovely little car club is what he said to me
how sweet was what i said
but what was really going through my head
was can we get together again?
recapture what we once had, had
I know, I know, it's the past
So not exactly relive it but begin again
start over, fresh, you know it's best.
Can't you see that I miss you that
I love you that I want to be with you
with my whole being. I do, I do!
Why can't you see it to??

... pretty silly but it's exactly what I want to say to him! :?

[de_rhcp]

Hey, hollybelle, what can we do, right?! this last one is not silly... i notice that you like white stripes, nice :D

is so good to read all this poems! it makes me feel so good, is a runaway... i want to post some stuff but it's all in portuguese, so i'll try to translate but it is hard sometimes.

life can be so boring :? !!

[hollybelle]

Thank you, I am trying to write more but I am so not a poet.
I loved your poem yes do try to write more. And I will post more as well.

Holly ;)

[Dania]

those are really nice poems

[Dania]

for u lois

Lois is sometimes a sweety but mostly a pain
she usually drives me insane
she pretends she loves Bob marley
But now I am beginning to see
she's always been after me!!

(hehe only jokin :-D )

[hollybelle]

:lol:

[Naughtyfig]

for u lois

Lois is sometimes a sweety but mostly a pain
she usually drives me insane
she pretends she loves Bob marley
But now I am beginning to see
she's always been after me!!

(hehe only jokin :-D )

BWAHAHAHAHA....
I didn't know u had much awesome rhyming skills muchacha?!!
that's funny I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!

[Hicksy]

i love poetry :D

[Guy'sChick]

Oh ballbreaking moon and ridiculing stars
The older I get, the closer you are
Don't you have somewhere that you need to be
Instead of hanging here making a fool of me..

[Hicksy]

:sad: :)

[Dania]

for u lois

Lois is sometimes a sweety but mostly a pain
she usually drives me insane
she pretends she loves Bob marley
But now I am beginning to see
she's always been after me!!

(hehe only jokin :-D )

BWAHAHAHAHA....
I didn't know u had much awesome rhyming skills muchacha?!!
that's funny I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!


Glad u liked it missy :-D

[Naughtyfig]

nice one...u should def. extend it...

_________

Find me sitting in my rocking chair
See age seeping through my hair
Get thrown back by the white glistening over my eyes
Hear the buzzing of the dragonflies
Help kitty untangle from that ball of yarn
See the unicorn playing behind the barn
The flowers in the garden are readily blooming
Feel death's breath in the air looming
Dust the cobwebs off my skin
In the doll on my lab, remove that pin
Prepare me a fancy maghony box
With golden handles and on the lid, the carved out face of a fox
Have pretty violins meddling in the background
Let my babies sprinkling petals above me on the ground
Cry for me for I have cried for you
But soon enough you'll join me up in heaven''s oceans of blue

[hollybelle]

Lois~ very goth-like. I like. ;)

Holly

[Guy'sChick]

I'm in my world of darkness,
I see only what I can,
the light is to far to reach,
and life seems grim,
I hold on to this feeling,
hoping it will guide,
but right now I am seeing,
that all I can do is find,
myself getting lost in your eyes,
my feet falling out from underneath me,
my heart breaking with every moment,
and life being everything but what it seemed to be,
I can't find the light, and this darkness won't subside,
I only wish to see true light,
once again in our life.

[hollybelle]

very nice!! ;)

[Guy'sChick]

hehe merci

[hollybelle]

what's your welcome in French? I can't remember! I had 2 yrs. of it in high school but didn't learn much of anything!! It was just grammar. Ugh i hate grammar!! :x

[Naughtyfig]

thanks holly....
I got that one i my head after having a really bad meal... :shrug: